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by BreeAnn
Fri Apr 14, 2017 6:55 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 5
Views: 1152

Re: Project 2 Final

Hi Michele, I see you put a lot of work into this site. I like the two Jaguars facing each other on the home page. The changing font for the hover is creating an effect that makes it difficult to click on the Membership button. I would also suggest maybe changing the background on the gallery page, ...
by BreeAnn
Fri Apr 14, 2017 6:44 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Kevin's project_2
Replies: 5
Views: 1127

Re: Kevin's project_2

Hey Kevin, Nice work. I'm glad you went with that window picture for your home page. I also like the choice of the family for the about page instead of the hammock lady. I would suggest that you have some kind of body copy on that page, it's leaving something to be desired with just the picture. Goo...
by BreeAnn
Tue Apr 11, 2017 6:48 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: FINAL - Project 02
Replies: 6
Views: 1400

Re: FINAL - Project 02

I love the changing index page Ed! That's great! You did a good job choosing pictures for your background images. The one thing I noticed is the resolution on the picture on the "parts" page is a little low resolution. It could just be this huge screen I'm looking at it on, but maybe try t...
by BreeAnn
Tue Apr 11, 2017 6:39 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two - Final
Replies: 6
Views: 1372

Re: Project Two - Final

Umm... Over-achiever much? This looks awesome Stephanie. I like how you can really tell that both sites were built by the same person. You've left your mark on them. I think you made a good choice with the new background image, it works much better for our area than the your prelim. There isn't real...
by BreeAnn
Tue Apr 11, 2017 6:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 5
Views: 1238

Re: Project 2 Final

Nice work Ivor! I think you did a really good job of recreating your personal home page, and the bad web site goes without saying. I'm not sure how I feel about the navigation moving from the home page to all the rest. That said, I don't think it would fit well at the top, so I'm torn. Also, Is ther...
by BreeAnn
Tue Apr 11, 2017 6:24 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 final
Replies: 4
Views: 996

Project 2 final

Hi All!

Looks like I forgot to actually post my site here after I uploaded it! Oops... Well, here it is!

Do your worst!

http://www.grc175.com/student/spring_20 ... n_st_onge/
by BreeAnn
Tue Mar 21, 2017 9:58 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 10
Views: 1957

Re: Project 2 Roughs

Hi Ivor, This is a tough choice. Visually, I like the second design with the planet, but it feels more like a movie preview site than a board game. I think your first design works better for the subject matter. I have to agree with comments already made, your subtitle should be the same size across ...
by BreeAnn
Tue Mar 21, 2017 9:31 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project_#2_rough
Replies: 10
Views: 1885

Re: project_#2_rough

Hi Elizabeth, You're off to a great start with these designs. I like the layout and the pictures you chose in the purple design, but I agree that the background for a photo site should be a neutral color. It doesn't have to be white, though I wouldn't go with black, maybe a lighter grey? The layout ...
by BreeAnn
Sun Mar 19, 2017 5:37 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: proj_2_prelim_layouts
Replies: 9
Views: 1655

Re: proj_2_prelim_layouts

Hi Kevin, Wow! that site is annoying!! Anyone reading this who hasn't already visited the original site, go there! Now! You're on to a good start with your improvements, I think you can use elements of all 4 pages for your final design. There's still a lot to work on though. I agree with everyone so...
by BreeAnn
Sun Mar 19, 2017 5:13 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2206

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

Hi Sarah, Nice improvements of the original site! I think the horizontal version is the better of the two, it's more visually appealing to me. The vertical version feels forced and a little like it's falling off the page. The suggestion I have for both designs is to move the social media links, foot...