Tucker M - Final

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Blackfïsk
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Tucker M - Final

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So This is my Final Design

Its not done all the way, I come back to it and add small details, I have also created some Gif images that will litter the site

This is seaweed
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This is a jellyfish, as you can see the glow I added didn't like turining into a gif very well, ill have to redo it as well as making both gifs loop endlessly.
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Here is the final design, I added a new font and navigation star, also the panels of different nautical things... I added the Titanic with some sharks and moby dick and the big Kraken.
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j.alexis93
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I think this nautical look that you have going on is really well. Having that closing page just seems a little unnecessary for me.
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Blackfïsk
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Idk what you mean by closing page. The whole thing is one page.
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Sorry, I didn't explain myself correctly. What I meant to say was that having the portfolio section like that is a little unecessary. Why isn't it the same size as the other sections?
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This is a site I would want to visit, over and over again (despite my fear & loathing of being underwater.) Will there be color, Tucker? All that work without color is a tragedy. There is plenty of color in the ocean, jellyfish to begin...?

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moserary wrote:This is a site I would want to visit, over and over again (despite my fear & loathing of being underwater.) Will there be color, Tucker? All that work without color is a tragedy. There is plenty of color in the ocean, jellyfish to begin...?
No I don't think I will add color, my artwork, especially my Photography is black and white and I really like the look of it. I wouldn't even know where to start with color tbh.
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I think this is such a cool idea, and I love the concept and layout. I'm concerned it might take too long for a viewer to be able to navigate it off the bat and lose interest. I'm going to agree with Rosemary in that you need a little color in the images to make some things pop out. I would suggest just trying a low value yellow on the light coming from the lighthouse, and the lights inside the ship at bottom of ocean. It looks awesome though.
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Great work! I already enjoy your website and I am so excited to see the real one!
but as others suggest, I hope you have some color on it. I'm sure that's gonna be awesome. Go for it!
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I just love this page so much! I love the black/white color scheme and its so cool how you put the graphics together. Definitely inspiration. Are you going to have a title or something on your opening page? I just am not sure what the page I am looking at is about without digging a little.

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nicolemae09 wrote:I just love this page so much! I love the black/white color scheme and its so cool how you put the graphics together. Definitely inspiration. Are you going to have a title or something on your opening page? I just am not sure what the page I am looking at is about without digging a little.
The opening page is going to be a 3-d rendered video actually, that will have a "dive" button... I wanted it to feel mysterious, I think it drives the site exploration.
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