project 3 critique!

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mel_nunez
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project 3 critique!

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hey everyone here is my design for project 3!
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tmccvwb.jpg
second_design.jpg
project3_grc175.jpg
project3_grc175seconddesign.jpg
Jose nunez

mawpe
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looks good Jose. I like the first design better, the colors and the images work well together
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re8ecca
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Post by re8ecca »

Hi Mel - I like your first set, it has a lot good elements going for it. To justify the space on top, I suggest changing the photograph for each internal page.
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donnalouwho
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Hi Mel,

I like the first set best. I'm really drawn to the circles and the colors you chose. Good luck, can't wait to see it all finished!
Donna Harn

Justin Hubert
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I like the first one and the second one, but I don't like the font choice on the second one. The first one is the one that I would like to see developed onto a website.
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DustDjinn
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concept one! The hold site flows beautifully.
Dustin Hill

Juan Vazquez Lopez
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Post by Juan Vazquez Lopez »

Hey Mel,
The first set of layouts looks great...i like the circle concept...
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I'mNicole
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Post by I'mNicole »

Heya Jose.

First one, all the way! It's has great structure while still being visually appealing, so good job. I'm a little concerned about what it will look like when you have too much content for your bubbles though, so just be careful with that.
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nunezm
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Hi Jose,
The first layout is strongest. Its clean and organized. Great Job!!
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Alexey M
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Post by Alexey M »

Both looks awesome, my favorite is the second one. No suggestions at all.
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