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Re: Project 03 prelim
Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2024 10:11 pm
by ngrunwald
Hi Ashton,
Your designs look good. The pictures you chose with the color choices work well together. Also the design seem easy to navigate. Overall great job
Re: Project 03 prelim
Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2024 10:45 pm
by SandraT
Hi Ashton,
These are so well done! It’s hard to see much difference but I like when you use images like in the “About the School” page. I’d just play around with the color of type or the geometric designs in the background.
Re: Project 03 prelim
Posted: Mon Mar 25, 2024 7:47 am
by Samson VJ Saldana Ornelas
Hey Ashton! I like the geometric design you're going with, really makes it stand out! I'd say to just work hierarchy a bit more, possibly using that geometric design to help establish that? Your hierarchy on the mobile roughs are good, it's just the desktop ones. Guiding the viewer's eyes to relevant information while not having all the type seem front and center would help, but overall I like the direction you're going in! I like your use of the logo in the corner on your mobile roughs too!