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Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 1:49 pm
by onnimelon
For this design I wanted stick to the TMCC style guiding. I have greeked out text, greyed out images and not the final font for headlines so it's still not as dynamic looking yet but hopefully it's still more interesting than the original site.


Link to original site:
https://www.tmcc.edu/visual-performing- ... technology

Version 1 Desktop Home and Inner Page + Mobile Version
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Version 2 Desktop Home and Inner Page + Mobile Version
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Re: Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 2:04 pm
by Brooke_Brown
Hey Alexandra! I really like your first versions, i like the lines that connect the dots too, its very nicely designed :)

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 2:18 pm
by chloecutter
Hey Alexandra, I enjoy the dark and light green combos in the footer, they look very nice next to each other! The layout with the lines is the winner for me, what a fun idea to guide the viewer through the page with connecting lines!

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2023 9:09 am
by Giselle
Hi Alex!
I love your first layout for the GAMT website. I like the purple, green, and blue contrast. I also like how you organized the information; it is visually pleasing. My only suggestion is to change the font to a serif font instead of a san serif. Other than that, I can't wait to see your website live! :D

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2023 2:29 pm
by LMisher
Hello Alexandra,

I think that you did a pretty good job with your overall concepts. I like your use of color and design structures. My favorite version was the first one. I can't wait to see the live version of your final website!

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2023 11:34 pm
by Natuwu
Hello Alexandra!
I really like your first design, the layout is very clean and your inner page really catches my eye! Personally, I would play around with the colors of the boxes in your inner page, they're really nice, but I feel like they don't match with the rest of the site. Maybe use the blue color you used in your second design?

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2023 8:06 pm
by Genevieve Dierenga
Hi, Alexandra

Both of your designs are pretty good but I like the first one more. I like how you layed out the homepage, I can tell how my eye just glides through the whole piece in a very organized way. I also feel that you did a very good job carrying it over to the mobile portion one suggestion I do have is it is sometimes artery the left align type you might think of using justified or right align type just to make it a little easier to read.

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 12:13 pm
by KAWINTHRAC
Hi Alex!

I really your design. Both are really good. I love your color choices, geometry shapes, round cornered buttons in different color made it very to navigate. I really like your program page in the first design. It's easy to follow. For student gallery, I like the one in second design. They are not equally in width but still attach to grid system, making them look clean and still interesting. Can't wait to see your final!

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 8:14 pm
by CedarM
Hey Alex,
Great job on your designs, I think you have done a great job in your use of color and graphic elements, I think the first one stands out more to me.

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Post

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 10:10 pm
by jillian_rodgers
Hi Alex!

I really enjoy both of your designs, but I think the first one is the stronger of the two! The flowchart looks great and that purple really compliments the green :)