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Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 7:50 am
by Sierra_Ross
Hello, everyone! Here are my roughs for project 4. I feel like my designs for the last project might've been a little too out of my skill range so I decided to make these ones a little simpler. I also tried to stick with similar colors to the TMCC website.

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 2:08 pm
by Brooke_Brown
Hi Sierra! I like your first rough with the green color, i think you could bring more color out, the grey is a more depressing mood i feel, and shows the true vibe of school haha which we're supposed to hide and make it seem fun and inviting

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 2:26 pm
by chloecutter
Hi Sierra, I also designed this based on what I know now through coding, it's super fun to make a complicated layout, but a much different story once it's time to code it haha. Nonetheless, I enjoy how simple and professional these are! Are your gray boxes going to be imagery? If so, I enjoy the idea of the diagonal/slanted layouts, but maybe incorporate more green into the design!

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2023 9:15 am
by Giselle
Hello Sierra!
I love your second design for the GAMT website. It has a secondary color besides black and white, making it pop out more. I suggest changing the grey/black color for a tint of the green you used in your second layout. It would add more dimension and take away the dark mood. I love the typeface you chose, and you expressed hierarchy well! I can't wait to see your website running :D

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2023 3:26 pm
by sophy_gg
Hi Sierra! I like your second design in black and white and green, it has easy navigation to work the GAMT website. In the first design, there is no navigation to go to About Us, and the color scheme sounds depressive because of Black and White or monochrome. We refer to the second one, it is too simple for you :D

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2023 4:55 pm
by LMisher
Hello Sierra!

I like the dark background with lime green the best, but both versions are good. You webpage is clean and easy to navigate, so I think that your finished product will come out nicely. Good job!

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2023 11:28 pm
by Natuwu
Hi Sierra!
I really like your last design for the homepage, I think the colors and layout work together nicely. For the inner pages, I think you should go with your first design with the diagonal, but change the white to a green.

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2023 7:45 pm
by Genevieve Dierenga
Hello, Sierra

I really like both your designs but I think I'm leaning more towards the second just because of the color combination between the green and the black one suggestion I do have for it is it's kind of hard to read the body copy so maybe add either a lighter background or a white font to make it easier to read.

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 12:06 pm
by KAWINTHRAC
Hi Sierra,

Both of your design are looking good. I like your second design a bit more. Colors are contrast to each other. The hierarchy of your fonts sizes is good and easy to read. The layout is clear for browsing the site too.

Re: Project 4 Preliminary Critique

Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2023 8:17 pm
by CedarM
Hey,
Great job on these designs! I really like your use of black and white, I think it allows your green to really stick out!