Project03 Preliminary Critique Roughs

[Natuwu]

Hi Alex!
I love your redesigns! I think the first one gives off more retro vibes, while the second one is slightly more "sophisticated". However, both do a great job at promoting the business. I'm having a hard time deciding between the two, but I think im leaning towards the second one. I just really like the organization in that one a bit more, but overall you did a great job!

[taylorichord]

This is great! The Cap n Games website is way too cluttered and overwhelming, but these feel very structured and organized. I especially like your second set. The colors are very easy to look at, and has easy navigation.
Great job!