Totally A Real Critique (Honest Guys!)

[Boop!]

I am not a sockpuppet piloted by your instructor. I am a real person. And I need your bank account info and social security numbers.

My totally cool website is here:
https://www.grc175.com/index.html
(please be gentle with your criticism )

My other totally cool website is located HERE
(rip this one apart )

Here's my first design. What do you think?


I've attached my second design. Tell me what I did well and what could be improved.

The mobile version of my second design

The computer version of my second design.

[Instructor]

Boop!, I have great concerns about your sanity and future in this industry. Perhaps you should seek a less mentally taxing career.