Re: Project 3 Bad Website Redesign
Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2022 8:18 pm
Hi Elle,
I like how you found a pretty gate to represent the company, it really speaks to the artistry in the work. I also really liked your type in the top right corner as it has good readability and contrast while also just being a good typographic pairing. The type in the left corner does have a contrast issue though and it is really battling the other type for hierarchy. Establishing a sense of order in the headers and subheads might help with visual flow. Nice start!
I like how you found a pretty gate to represent the company, it really speaks to the artistry in the work. I also really liked your type in the top right corner as it has good readability and contrast while also just being a good typographic pairing. The type in the left corner does have a contrast issue though and it is really battling the other type for hierarchy. Establishing a sense of order in the headers and subheads might help with visual flow. Nice start!