prelimmy number 3

[Megan Greaves]

This is a hilarious choice for a redesign, and quite a challenging choice too! I almost appreciate the "go away" vibes. I like that neat logo you created in your first design, but that background in the second set is so lovely and retro. You could even use that for a mobile background on a phone. It creates a fun contrast visually with the sassy tone of what the site is actually saying. I'm eager to see what other kinds of content you can generate for this site. XD

[Meghna_Misson]

Hey Kristen,
I love how you mentioned in your description to keep the website "customer unfriendly" haha. But besides this, I would say to go with the second design because of the layout and logo. There is also something about that gradient stripe on the left-side of the home page and in the inner sample page that catches my attention because of its connection back to the website's origin date--great attention to detail and communication for the site's users! Since this website focuses on being plain, I wouldn't suggest anything more being done to it besides fixing up the hierarchy of text in for the home page. Other than that, good job!

[Ericha Eberhart]

Hi Kirsten,
I like the second design best, it has a good movement to it. There does seem to be a contrast issue with your body copy and the purplish line and I am not sure that your typefaces are working together as well as others could. Nice start though!

[Mike_Chavez123]

Don’t stop, like magic in the rain! Keep going, build it to a final and let’s take a look there together!