Preliminary!
- Megan Greaves
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Re: Preliminary!
I would definitely go with the dark background set. Really goes with the theme of items that glow in the dark. I agree with getting rid of the blue and just keeping everything suspended in the deep black. This is probably a chaotic, terrible suggestion, but I think it would be fun if the white text had different colored glows on them. Really make a shining rainbow stand out in the night. Very fun and vibrant.
- Meghna_Misson
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Re: Preliminary!
Hey Lily,
Great concepts! I'm more towards the first design because of the layout and organization; I also like the idea that you're going for with the dark background and having the images pop off of it like the neon sticks--I would try incorporating the colorful box-shadows that Mr. Green taught in yesterday's video for this effect (maybe when the user's mouse hovers over the image, it displays the glow from behind it--I think that will be very cool to pull off!). However, I'm not quite feeling it with the font choice for the headlines, so I think a different typeface is needed. But other than that, great work! Can't wait to see the finalized version!
Great concepts! I'm more towards the first design because of the layout and organization; I also like the idea that you're going for with the dark background and having the images pop off of it like the neon sticks--I would try incorporating the colorful box-shadows that Mr. Green taught in yesterday's video for this effect (maybe when the user's mouse hovers over the image, it displays the glow from behind it--I think that will be very cool to pull off!). However, I'm not quite feeling it with the font choice for the headlines, so I think a different typeface is needed. But other than that, great work! Can't wait to see the finalized version!
Meghna Misson - student
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Re: Preliminary!
Hi Lily!
You nailed the neon fun and funky look! I like your first design the best because the use of a dark background says something about what the product is, and it is just very clean altogether. The one comment I have is about the fact that the images have black backgrounds and the page background is a dark blue, what if you made the page background the same color as the image background? Just a thought, nice start!
You nailed the neon fun and funky look! I like your first design the best because the use of a dark background says something about what the product is, and it is just very clean altogether. The one comment I have is about the fact that the images have black backgrounds and the page background is a dark blue, what if you made the page background the same color as the image background? Just a thought, nice start!
-Ericha Eberhart
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Re: Preliminary!
I knew you could, I’d add a bit of neon but overall keep it up!