Project three Final_Lea

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Ltrueworthy
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Project three Final_Lea

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Hi everyone,

Here is the link to my project three website. I am still working on connecting all my projects together on my personal website but here is just the single link for now.

http://www.grc175.com/student/fall_2017/lea_trueworthy/

Thanks for looking!
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Ariesboxsye
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Amazing color scheme, really gives a digital artist type feel for me.

I think its obvious to you that your nav buttons don't go anywhere, and if they do might want to check if they are linked properly because the hover animation is nice and feels tempting to push that button but I lose my satisfaction when I'm still on the same page.
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SerenDark
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I find that the nav buttons do work, but they seem to take two clicks to do so, sometimes?
Your site looks great! I love how you framed the colorful image background with the footer and header bar, and I quite enjoy how the yellow of your nav bar carries further the yellow in the pen tool up top. The static footer is a nice touch, also. The nav buttons themselves could be more interesting I think, and perhaps some of the body copy could benefit from being white.
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Kyler_Rose
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Over all your website is looking nice, but i have a problem with your footer area is alittle to large and tends to block information and and makes it hared to read.
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breezy
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Post by breezy »

Hey,

I loved seeing all your amazing designs this semester, great job!
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ktwy
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So pretty! As you're working on it, I would suggest making your footer smaller and dropping it at the bottom of the page rather than in a fixed spot as you scroll. Great job :)
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fjbo
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It's awesome.

The Strong: Illustration. Concept. Your website is very interesting I really like the concept and style of your website. The illustration on the top right is pretty nicely done.

The Not-So Strong: Navigation. Font Size. I believe its due to technical issues and people already pointed it out, but ti is not working. I believe the text size is unnecessarily big added with your concept where the header and footer are always there which makes the website a little hard to view.

Personally, as a user, I don't like sticky elements because they can waste a lot of screen size (specially on mobile phones in landscape mode), but I believe your concept has uniqueness to it. I would recommend optimizing the size of the elements and managing your concept because it's interesting.

Unfortunately, I was not able to explore the rest of your site other than the homepage.

Nice work.
FJBO

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