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project 2 link

Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2017 10:24 pm
by Marco_Horta1
hello everyone, finally here are my first websites tryouts. I will continue to redefine and fine tune those websites

Here is the link to the project two, http://www.grc175.com/student/fall_2017 ... index.html

Re: project 2 link

Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2017 7:42 pm
by susielang
Your home page is great. Really like what you did with the GRC 175 logo. The site before and after- what a difference. Really liking the placement of the images. Think it looks 100 percent better. Information is much easier to read and navigate.

Re: project 2 link

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2017 12:07 pm
by chaytothet
Hey! Nice going, I really like the way things are headed.

My poor little brain would LOVE to see a splash of color somewhere. They layouts are so well developed I'd love to see some color. Maybe the blue that is reflected in the product images? I think that would really take things to the next level.

I really like what you've done with the place!!

Re: project 2 link

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:27 pm
by erika.murray
Home page is looking good. You could push the typefaces a little more, they are looking somewhat basic and I feel like it should match more with your really cool GRC logo.

As for the product website, you did a nice job cleaning up that wall of text! I really like the products page and the layout. Again, I think you should go with different typeface. Maybe a sans serif would look nice.

Re: project 2 link

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2017 3:59 pm
by selvster5000
Marco you definitely did a solid job on cleaning up the original website design. That original website still makes my eyes hurt!
It looks very clean and organized and the color scheme gives the website a professional feel to it. I think your homepage may
look more visually appealing by incorporating more colors from your logo into the layout design. Overall well done.

Re: project 2 link

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2017 4:30 pm
by Instructor
Very clean layout work, Marko. Very clean indeed. The high contrast white background reminds me of a clean room where these radical new Atari consoles are built. The rest of your layout reflects this too. Your margins are clean and allow everything it's place without fragmenting your design. Your images provide eye catching splashes of color in your "clean room". They layout of your type is also strong and emphasizes the organization of your content. Your navigation is well placed and easy to see and use.

Having now seen it blown up on the big screen, I don't think the Atari logo needed that drop shadow. I'm still not fond of the serif type. It does not work well for a tech website. I'd also have liked to see a couple of more pages on the website.

Nice effort!

Re: project 2 link

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2017 6:58 pm
by SerenDark
Your home site is really clean and really easy to navigate! I love what you did with the GRC logo.
However, the logo is so much more interesting than the rest of the site. It has more color, it has more a more interesting font style. I would love to see some of this expression carried out elsewhere on your site.

Your Atari site is great and organized well! I think it could benefit from a light splash of the blue that's in the main product images, and your type overall doesn't really feel to fit the theme very well. Eurostile might be a good choice for the navbar text and the "Best Electronics CA", among other headers, I believe.

Re: project 2 link

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2017 8:15 pm
by breezy
Hey,

Looking good! Overall both sites are great but I would love to see a little more color in both of them!

Re: project 2 link

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2017 8:19 pm
by Peelio
Hi,

The two designs look great and flow very well. Overall the websites are easy to navigate. The graphics on the grc page really pop and stand out. The contrast is great, but maybe more colors from the logo could be used as accents to give a little more visual interest. The best electronics page design is clean and sleek. The products page images and style are visually appealing.

Re: project 2 link

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2017 10:11 pm
by Cassiebowers
Your website is really clean and I like how you did the layout of the pictures on the Project 2 home page. Maybe add a color somewhere to make your layout pop a bit more.