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Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco

Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 10:50 pm
by breezy
Hey,

I like your fourth design the best! It is the only one that seems like it's coming from a natural view point. The blur around the edge of the picture is a little distracting and interferes with the text in some areas. Great job overall!

Cheers,

Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco

Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2017 7:34 pm
by Pearl_Underwood
I like the last two designs. I like the third, showing the sugar cane field, and how natural that looked. In the fourth design, I liked the layout, colors, and the colorfulness of the food that stood out.

Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco

Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2017 12:04 am
by SerenDark
Designs 1 and 4 are the best, I feel.
I would like to see some of the more expressive, creative fonts from design 2 in design 4, I think. It could make the very modern, businessy professional design have a little more fun flavor to it. You might also change the shape of the nav bar from a rectangle to be rounded on the far sides, to go along with the corporation logo.

Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco

Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:56 pm
by chaytothet
I really enjoy the first design, I'm not sure if the other's could be modified to be interior pages. But in my opinion, I would use the first for the main page and the third for the interior pages. This would show the contrast between the industrial, and the plant the sugar comes from.