prelim_#3

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Ka80kins
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prelim_#3

Post by Ka80kins »

In my first layout I made it simple but straight to the point. I am finishing my other rough but I can't wrap my head around how to finish it. So ill post the second one tomorrow. I am trying to make my roughs different so the first one is simple and the second one will be complex in the design aspect.
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j.alexis93
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Re: prelim_#3

Post by j.alexis93 »

It seems like a rough design, but I get a clear idea what you're going for. I think you should use photos of TMCC instead of Reno.
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Re: prelim_#3

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I think you have a good idea but I don't have anything to compare it to. One suggestion is that I would not center align your body copy. Maybe justify with the last line aligned left. Good start, my friend.
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lsimgrc175
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Re: prelim_#3

Post by lsimgrc175 »

I like the second one because of the big GRC, which also covers a lot of the brown half of the landscape, but you can still look at it if you want to.

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Re: prelim_#3

Post by warren.asher@gmail.com »

I like the second one better, and I like the transparency on your navigation bar. I would reccomend changing the justify center on the body copy. I think it work better with justify right or put into two columns
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japanese_panda
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Re: prelim_#3

Post by japanese_panda »

I like your ideas on navigation button. but if you put black on hoover button and put white type on button, it will make low readability.

Pick same value color!
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Blackfïsk
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Re: prelim_#3

Post by Blackfïsk »

Shrink the navigation so it only takes up the header image, i like the transparency. The grey bottom is very boring, just make it white and play with your typography.
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sierra_style
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Post by sierra_style »

I like your second layout more. Very interesting to look at, but the body copy could be laid out more exciting with images and what not. Very nice work though!
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Ka80kins
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Re: prelim_#3

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This is my second set of roughs, sorry I didn't post sooner.
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nicolemae09
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Re: prelim_#3

Post by nicolemae09 »

I am liking the second layout more. There is just move visual interest to it which i think is important for a graphics program page. I think the placements can be worked with of the text. The instructors text and the navigation bar on the home page are just in odd spots.

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