Project 3 Preliminary

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warren.asher@gmail.com
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Project 3 Preliminary

Post by warren.asher@gmail.com »

Hello class,
Here are my four roughs for project 3. Let me know what you think.

They are labeled accordingly to the file name.
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inside_2.jpg
homepage_2.jpg
inside_1.jpg
homepage_p1.jpg
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Ka80kins
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Post by Ka80kins »

I like your Graphics in both. I don't like your bright colors though! Your second one is cool for navigation and graphics but the colors need work its just too much but definitely your second one.
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Post by lsimgrc175 »

I like the eye design but not the blue & yellow colors. Also, Michael Ganschow-Green appears to have body-snatched Brian Wells.
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daveryjones
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The bottom one does have really cool graphics and layout but you definitely need to dial back on the bright colors. They hurt my eyes a little, haha. And try choosing two complimentary colors. Good start though man.
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j.alexis93
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Post by j.alexis93 »

I like the graphic that you used in your second layout, but the colors are way too bright. You should try to use TMCC colors.
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Post by japanese_panda »

I like top one.
Campus image looks pop out well!
I like your eye image either, but it looks too big impact for top image.
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Blackfïsk
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Post by Blackfïsk »

HAHAHA DAMN YOU! I used that second background image in my designs too! :twisted:

Oh well I actually like the top one best but the idea of showcasing a cool graphical element like the bottom eye is cool, though that design is WAYYYY to bright and distracting.
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papasmurf124
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Post by papasmurf124 »

Extremely vivid and bright perfect. This is what your in for in the grc program: After two minutes i had a head ach...lol. I would go with the top one Just dull it down a bit.
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Post by punkassbookjockey »

I love the Pantene eye of sauren you have there! Pay attention to the negative space around it.
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Post by sierra_style »

I like your top design more. The homepage is very inviting and makes you want to see what else there is. I think the colors could be changed a little to be more pleasing to the eye, which I'm sure now that you'll have some more time to do it will be easy. Nice work though!
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