Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

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Which one do you think is better?

Poll ended at Wed May 08, 2013 5:22 pm

I like first design better
2
20%
I like second design better
8
80%
 
Total votes: 10

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Alexey M
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Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

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These are my two version for grc web page.

On the first one I decided to add more colors and make the pages look bright and kinda happy.
For the second design, I decided to stick with solid design, using just black white and TMCC green color.
Hope you ll like it guys.

Thanks for your feedbacks.
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Post by OliviasMama12 »

Hi Alexey-

Well i think I like the color scheme of the first drafts more, but the Typography of the second layouts. Is there anyway you could combine both elements???
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Hello Alexis,
I like the second layout, I think the green and the black background make a good contrast besides that I like how you played with the shapes into the layout...also I like your pictures ...good job.
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hi alexey! nice job on both, it is hard to decide! i like elements in both but i think i like the second overall. i like the blocking and the large images you used. good job!
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I like the second designs color and layouts much better than the tops one.
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Second one!! I voted too
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Dude, your vote thing is off the way awesome! Good work on both of these layouts!
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Post by I'mNicole »

Heya Alexey.

I love the line of colorful letters on your first layout, and that pink peeling sticker for your links! Amazing! I do think the header could use some work to make it more interesting. Your second layout is very clean and neat, and I think the shapes for your images and content, but the background on that one makes me want to look away.
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Hi Alexey,

Nice roughs!! I agree with the first layout feel more happy especially with color being used. Also its clean and it flows nicely. The second layout is also clean and organized. I'm undecided whatever one you will look amazing. I personally voted for the second one. Nice Job!!
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Post by Siri »

Alexey,

I'm definitely liking the second layout. While the first layout is good and rather colourful, the second layout is very clean. It could use a little spicing up, but otherwise you're taking it in a good direction with clear hierarchy.
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