PROJECT 4 prelim :D
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yasmin_bean
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I personally like the second concept the best. It's more consistent overall and has a good color scheme. Plus the layout is easy and guides the eye across the screen.
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Hey Kai,
I like your first design the best. The white background with black text makes everything easy to read and I like your banner. I would consider just adding a menu instead of that hamburger style menu on the web version and I think your mobile design still has some work.
I like your first design the best. The white background with black text makes everything easy to read and I like your banner. I would consider just adding a menu instead of that hamburger style menu on the web version and I think your mobile design still has some work.
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Hi Kai!
Everyone disagrees with me so thats fine, but I like the second design more than the first, it seems a little bit more clean and precise. Your call though, I think these are both decent options for your website.
Everyone disagrees with me so thats fine, but I like the second design more than the first, it seems a little bit more clean and precise. Your call though, I think these are both decent options for your website.
- Mars Sink
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lil_cactux
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Hey Kai,
I really like your second design! The contrast is good and easy to read. I think the subhead font could be a little smaller but overall great job!
I really like your second design! The contrast is good and easy to read. I think the subhead font could be a little smaller but overall great job!
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keatonbeatty
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Kai,
I'm torn, I like both sets with the white type and the black type... however, I am leaning more towards the white because it adds some more visual interest to your design. Layouts looking good as well, Great Job!
I'm torn, I like both sets with the white type and the black type... however, I am leaning more towards the white because it adds some more visual interest to your design. Layouts looking good as well, Great Job!
~ keaton beatty
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Hello Kai, I think you have some strong concepts. I like the layout in your first one and the navigation in the second one. I think combining some elements from each could have a cool result. Good work!
- Nick Martinez 
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Hi Kai,
I like the first design more than your second one, the contrast of the white helps bring your body type out more than the green. The only thing I would work on is on organizing the body type and changing the size of it, on your mobile designs they look a bit too big and on your computer designs they look a bit small so make sure to get them at a legible size that works well with your site. Great job!
I like the first design more than your second one, the contrast of the white helps bring your body type out more than the green. The only thing I would work on is on organizing the body type and changing the size of it, on your mobile designs they look a bit too big and on your computer designs they look a bit small so make sure to get them at a legible size that works well with your site. Great job!
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kelseymarie_ba
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Hi Kai,
I think both designs are great so far! So far, I think I gravitated towards the first design. I keep commenting that the white background is simple but still makes a clean and legible design! Something that I think would help with your website would be to add columns or add more space to your body texts. Hope that helps and can't wait to see your final website!
Kelsey Bautista
I think both designs are great so far! So far, I think I gravitated towards the first design. I keep commenting that the white background is simple but still makes a clean and legible design! Something that I think would help with your website would be to add columns or add more space to your body texts. Hope that helps and can't wait to see your final website!
Kelsey Bautista