Hey Liv!
I love the changes you have made since the last critique. The background image works well in contrast with your foreground. The semi-transparent rectangle helps the black text pop off the background. As for my critique, the body copy is hard to read with the tight kerning, and all-caps style. Other than that, great work!
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Re: Project01
Hey Liv!
Cool choice of font for your name! I like the choice of putting everything in a box. It’s visually interesting. It looks modern. Your body text is way too small and there’s way too much space above the body text and below. And all caps is harder to read. I like what you’re going for!
Cool choice of font for your name! I like the choice of putting everything in a box. It’s visually interesting. It looks modern. Your body text is way too small and there’s way too much space above the body text and below. And all caps is harder to read. I like what you’re going for!