Project One Preliminary Critique

[kaiyote03]

A blessed day to you my friend Quinn,

I am loving your designs. They are simple but they are working very well in your layout. I love the color in your first design as its mellow, laid back, and very pleasing to view. Your type choice also works very well and fits smoothly with the simplicity of your layout.

I also love the second design and how the 1 color really adds to the dynamics of the design. In my opinion I would move the color from your first design and check it out with the mono-color theme as I think that the yellow would fit well and get rid of the contrast issues you have between the black and orange in the second design.

I wish you good luck on your designs! (o゜▽゜)o☆

[nancyrey143]

Hi Quinn,
I'm liking the yellow layout a bit more. I like the overlap of your name on your photo in the mobile
app, if there's a way to do this to the desktop please do! It looks really cool. I would add some
white boxes around the nav to give them a bit more emphasis, or even bold them up. Overall,
these look great!

[Hinata_Sato]

Hello Quinn!
I love the colors and layouts you chose for your designs! Both of them work pretty well for the layout, but I like the first one more. Your name pops out and I think the color of the background is working well with the white font. I would fill your either last name or first name with white to make them even more pop out! If you're more towards the second one, I suggest making the font colors of the body copy white since I think it stands out more. Nice work!