project 3 (the real one)

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thusers
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project 3 (the real one)

Post by thusers »

here it is as a sketch.
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thusers
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Re: project 3 (the real one)

Post by thusers »

bad ass, man. looks like graffiti.

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Post by jenny_snaza »

Love the text! Great job, and can't wait to see it finished!

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sktlz1965
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Nice, I think if you use maybe a dark background, maybe include metallic, and metal finishes to it might be kinda cool...I think this will be a really cool design once fully complete! good job

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Alaxvong
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This is a cool design. I would consider a larger content area. Maybe you can shrink down the navigation a bit too.

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TommieGuy
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This is going to be nice. I think the design is strong. Yes, think about making the links smaller.

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artgalstyle
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I like the big type and it would be cool as metal or something fun. You can always put more content on your other pages. I also think the buttons could be smaller or somehow fit them into the title so it looks like one way cool design. Bet your background would look cool with a soft texture but not so much and to compete with the Big Text. Love it!

Laramie

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deni
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Post by deni »

I like this design. I like the graffiti look a lot. Great job!

Denise

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R3YNO
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Post by R3YNO »

Its one thing to make a graphiti headline, Its another thing to make legible. You sir have done that and it looks cool. Any thoughts on colors?
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cheyanne
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Post by cheyanne »

I agree with the others. Metallic textures and smaller navigation would make it modern and design-y. I really like the graffiti idea.

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