Hello, one and all, to the final critique of my website.
So, unfortunately, I read the assignment wrong and did not realize this was needed to have a live website and thought I was doing the design aspect only rather than programming. I did, however, manage to complete the picture designs, thankfully, so I know what to make. I will attempt to program The HTML/CSS aspects I know blind over the weekend as I do not have Dreamweaver at home. It can correct me on Monday when I have access to it again and add what needs to be added. My live version will most likely not be up until Monday at the earliest. I will note here when I did so; I may be graded accordingly for the late portion of this work.
I wanted to take the design I already had and make it less boring for my website, so I added some background images. I tinted them to make them look more interesting and made all the boxes more curved to keep the professional vibe but add a bit of calm.
Here is the mobile and web version of the home page.
on the inner pages, I kept the same color and pictures consistent for the most part but added in gradients as it can quickly go on forever in a section of the page that is scrolling.
I also added two color swatches with the purple being the color for that page in the "Contact Us" section of the website and the one with the green box being for the "For You" section of the website
and her is the inner pages that I created
update 4/25/2022
I kinda finished my website after 12 hours of programing over the weekend and small fixes today but it ain't perfect cause I suck at coding.
https://www.grc175.com/student/spring-2 ... index.html
AS like my last project if you have any tips on how to fix certain glitches and aspects of the code then I am all ears. thanks to still not knowing how to fix the fancy boxes when the screen shrinks only this one now adds onto growing screens to.
yippy kiya I hate it lol
project 3 final
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project 3 final
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I love how beautiful you made this site look. It looks like quality, establishment, Scandinavian barn and decor... Everything about it is charming (except for the one weird photo, which is less janky to me with how you've toned it down with all the beautiful graphics now surrounding it). I am also impressed that you are creating the html and css on a word doc and entering it at school tomorrow. Kind of amazeballs, to me. I kinda wish we'd learned html and css that way, on paper first. I hope it slides right in there like a hand in glove when you enter it tomorrow. Beautiful graphic design, Samantha, really gorgeous. :- )
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Hi I love your designs they are beautiful, I want to see it as a website
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Great job I really like the layout design the most
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Not bad for a 12 hour speed build, Samantha!
As with your preliminary work, your background image really sets the tone here. It makes the reader think of gentle pastoral living, which seems appropriate. You've done a pretty good job realizing the belt navigation, which is a fun concept. I especially like the buckle Home button. Good work injecting a custom font in with CSS. Your font makes me think of signs in front of expensive farms. Also appropriate. Good color choices as well. They work nicely with your great background image. That's a neat idea putting all of your contact info in the dropdown. You see that on some websites where designers use dropdown not as navigation, but as informational pop ups. Orthogonal thinking!
A few quick fixes, as requested. On your navigation buttons that don't have links on them, add a "cursor: pointer;" property and value to the rule that styles them. Watch your overlap on your home button. It's obscuring your "For Sale and Sold" button. Some of your content at the bottom is being clipped off with no scrollbars. I'm assuming there's some sort of "overflow: hidden;" property set somewhere that's preventing the web page from popping scrollbars. I would have liked to have seen a few pictures in your content area.
Good effort!
As with your preliminary work, your background image really sets the tone here. It makes the reader think of gentle pastoral living, which seems appropriate. You've done a pretty good job realizing the belt navigation, which is a fun concept. I especially like the buckle Home button. Good work injecting a custom font in with CSS. Your font makes me think of signs in front of expensive farms. Also appropriate. Good color choices as well. They work nicely with your great background image. That's a neat idea putting all of your contact info in the dropdown. You see that on some websites where designers use dropdown not as navigation, but as informational pop ups. Orthogonal thinking!
A few quick fixes, as requested. On your navigation buttons that don't have links on them, add a "cursor: pointer;" property and value to the rule that styles them. Watch your overlap on your home button. It's obscuring your "For Sale and Sold" button. Some of your content at the bottom is being clipped off with no scrollbars. I'm assuming there's some sort of "overflow: hidden;" property set somewhere that's preventing the web page from popping scrollbars. I would have liked to have seen a few pictures in your content area.
Good effort!
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I like the overall western theme of the page and the blue and tan tones set the pages up nicely. The things I would tinker with are a little animation in the buttons maybe and then the way you have your footer it looks as though one could scroll down to more content. Will there be more content?
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Hi! I like the cloud background, it works well with your nav colors and country vibe, nice start!
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Hey Samantha,
I love the work you put into the visuals, they look amazing! However, I am unable to view them properly on the live site you had created, it might be due to my monitor size being more square-ish, but the navigation becomes compact and I cannot scroll down to see the rest of the page. But besides this, I do find your design really nice and satisfies a majority of the project's requirements. Good job!
I love the work you put into the visuals, they look amazing! However, I am unable to view them properly on the live site you had created, it might be due to my monitor size being more square-ish, but the navigation becomes compact and I cannot scroll down to see the rest of the page. But besides this, I do find your design really nice and satisfies a majority of the project's requirements. Good job!
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i think the overall design is great. bummer we cant view the site!
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Sam!
Wow great job for such a fast turnaround on your html/css! This looks and works very well. Obviously there are some issues with layout of your nav but overall, majorly impressed with how much you got done in such a short amount of time. Btw your links to the troll face and yoda made my day. HILARIOUS.
Anyways overall great job with everything and a great effort. I know you have mentioned before how you struggle with coding and I share your pain ten-fold. I am STILL working on my very LATE project 3 but wish me luck I finally get the thing up and running this weekend AND THEN IMMEDIATELY onto project 4. Oi.
Anyways great job and keep it up! We are almost to the end! Onto Chapter 4 (almost for me).
Best,
Zach
Wow great job for such a fast turnaround on your html/css! This looks and works very well. Obviously there are some issues with layout of your nav but overall, majorly impressed with how much you got done in such a short amount of time. Btw your links to the troll face and yoda made my day. HILARIOUS.
Anyways overall great job with everything and a great effort. I know you have mentioned before how you struggle with coding and I share your pain ten-fold. I am STILL working on my very LATE project 3 but wish me luck I finally get the thing up and running this weekend AND THEN IMMEDIATELY onto project 4. Oi.
Anyways great job and keep it up! We are almost to the end! Onto Chapter 4 (almost for me).
Best,
Zach