Project 3 Bad Website Redesign

[Ericha Eberhart]

Hi Elle,
I like how you found a pretty gate to represent the company, it really speaks to the artistry in the work. I also really liked your type in the top right corner as it has good readability and contrast while also just being a good typographic pairing. The type in the left corner does have a contrast issue though and it is really battling the other type for hierarchy. Establishing a sense of order in the headers and subheads might help with visual flow. Nice start!

[Elle Barre]

Wow, thank you all for your nice compliments on what works with my first submission (this is post-deadline and post-most critiques April 2, 2022), and thank you MORE for the useful advice from critiques! You'll see your direct contribution to my learnin' right here: and, tell me more what you think, hoping to hear from late comers to critiques and, from repeat offenders: please drop your wisdom on me! :- )

This one is for Spencer, in honor of Billy Gates, the inspiration of Gates n Fences.

[Mike_Chavez123]

I love it! A little rough on the edges but great! Keep it up!