Project 03 preliminary critique

[comicsansfanclub]

Hi Jacklyn,

Wow you did an amazing job! I like how you incorporated some of the original images from the website onto your design and kept that same color scheme. That was a really nice touch. All of your layouts are sooo good, but I'm leaning toward your first one the most. The only thing that I would change/ experiment with would be with the original logo. Right now, the original logo doesn't really fit with the aesthetic or type that you've chosen for your layout. I think that by making just a few adjustments to the original logo it will look great. I'm excited to see your final design.

[kendall_the_mann]

Hi Jacklyn!

I really like the layout of your second website! The cupcakes sitting by themselves on the background is so visually pleasing, I really like that it makes the rest of the webpage pop! I also really like the colors you use, they work really well together.

Awesome job!

[aka_fefi]

Hi Jacklyn,

I really like your designs, the pink is very cute. I like that you used their existing photos to make it more personalized. I think any of them would be good, maybe mix and match your favorite bits from each design so you end up with something fantastic.