Project 3 Roughs

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hiitsyuri24
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Project 3 Roughs

Post by hiitsyuri24 »

Hi everyone,

I kept everything simple! I used TMCC GREEN first and got bored, so I used few different colors for other one.
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tweetysmurf2350
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by tweetysmurf2350 »

I like the clean and professional look of the first one, it looks like it belongs at a University, let alone a Community College. The second one has merit, but the bright neon colors you used kind of makes my eyes vibrate, so over all go with the first one.
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Drakula
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

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I'm torn between the two. I like the first one for the sake of simplify and the overall TMCC aesthetic, but I feel the second one is so interesting and fun.
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jason_hosier
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by jason_hosier »

ugh, to be honest I think the color overlay in your first set doesn't look right. I like your second layout especially the strong images you've chosen but the colors just don't appear professional or look like a college website. it looks like you are promoting a preschool. my second set of designs is kind of like this too. lol.
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emilyduke
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Post by emilyduke »

I love color, but I think the first one looks more like a website to me. You could try getting rid of the black stroke on your big transparent box-it might make it look a little cleaner, and this is kind of like my Project 2 page design! The transparent box over a big image is nice!
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veronica chapman
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by veronica chapman »

I like your first design with the mountains in the back, my only suggestion is the white box overlay could maybe be scaled to better fit the contents. it seems that there is too much empty.

raton de biblioteca
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by raton de biblioteca »

The first design is so Reno in the fall! The green color that you have is spot on!!!
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evexhouses
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I think the first set are my favorite, I would suggest playing around with your fonts a bit and adding more content to your pages. A picture is worth a 1000 words!
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clawson
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Post by clawson »

I like both designs and either could work. In the photo I'd try lessening how much green there is. On the second design I might try using "jewel-tone" colors as a way of unifying the design. Both are easy to read and visually interesting
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by matt »

Hi Yuri,

out of the two layouts that you've put up I definitely prefer the second over the first. It seems like you can create visual interest around the simple minimal style.

I can't wait to see these put into a website. nice work

I like the font choice too. It complements the overall concept of your design.
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