project 1 rough #2

[hiitsyuri24]

Hi!
I like your colors in first set, but the paragraph is little bit hard to read. I would suggest make it little bigger. Great job!

[Zera-Chann]

Love the style and layout for the computer one!

The phone one layout seems a little too much

Good luck!!

[giusti56]

Hello, I like the color and use of images. I think some spacing with the images and rearranging would help the overall design though.

[clawson]

I like the layered background and think it is a strong design that could even to stand on it's own without the photos

[themeg98]

I love the colors on this one! The only thing I would change is try to dull your background a little bit. The imagery kinda gets lost with all thats going on back there. Nice use of the flares but I wouldn't use too many on the desktop design.

[raton de biblioteca]

Hi Ronnie,

I agree with the others on this one! The color contrast especially the purple yellow makes this layout pop on my screen. The tiling looks well balanced and keeps my interest. If there was something that I would improve upon, I would make it so that the purple of the image and the purple of the background had more contrast, but this is really minor for me. Overall refreshing design.

Best,

Rachel

[anayaestevan]

Hey Veronica,

I like these designs. It reminds me of a Scientology website. I would just be careful about the background interfering with the foreground. It's a little distracting for me. You have nice font choices here too!

[Zera-Chann]

I would say i like this more than the purple and yellow

Best of luck!

[Tickosity]

I like the colors on these ones. However I'm finding the bright white starbursts distracting for me.