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JulianEmme
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project three

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Super late, but here are m preliminaries. Still working, but here's what I've got so far
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Kyler_Rose
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Overall your websites are coming along, I like the homepage for the second plate but your body pages for both of your designs still need alot of work. With the second body page template the text is hard to read agaist the background.
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I like the second design best. I like the font you chose for your nav bar.
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Design 1 feels nice with how airy and open it is and its friendly palette. However, the overall organization can use some work and the bodycopy is quite squished/stretched.
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Ariesboxsye
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Your first choice has more visual appeal to me, however, be careful of the simplicity of your layout and color pallet.
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Hey,

I really like your first layout, it's clean and laid out well, great job!
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I really like the second Idea!

It seems more chill, the other is a little intense with the color choice and the large brain.
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