Hi everyone! My websites are up and ready for your viewing.
For my Project 2 website, I decided to go with my first layout. It seemed that the orange graphic was what caught people's attention.
The sites are best viewed with Firefox and Safari. Let me know what you think!
http://www.grc175.com/student/fall_2017/erika_murray/
Project 2 - Final
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Project 2 - Final
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Erika Murray
Erika Murray
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Re: Project 2 - Final
Mmmmmmmmmm! Orange Juice.
See! Now that's what I'm talking about. Your website is bright and cheery and even a little cartoony. It makes me want to reach for a nice, refreshing glass of orange juice. Your colors are spot on, from the different tints of orange (naturally) to the blue and green accent colors, everything seems like a bright summer day. I like your font choices as well. The super black font works as a great title and subhead and your sans-serif serves up the information quickly and easily. The margins are well done throughout the entire thing. The whole website is visually refreshing, like the product it advertises.
I think the top navigation could use to be a bit larger and more prominent. It get's drowned out by your right button sub nav. Your product page is a little borked. The footer is floating under your content. I think a clear:both was missed somwhere in there.
Excellent job!
See! Now that's what I'm talking about. Your website is bright and cheery and even a little cartoony. It makes me want to reach for a nice, refreshing glass of orange juice. Your colors are spot on, from the different tints of orange (naturally) to the blue and green accent colors, everything seems like a bright summer day. I like your font choices as well. The super black font works as a great title and subhead and your sans-serif serves up the information quickly and easily. The margins are well done throughout the entire thing. The whole website is visually refreshing, like the product it advertises.
I think the top navigation could use to be a bit larger and more prominent. It get's drowned out by your right button sub nav. Your product page is a little borked. The footer is floating under your content. I think a clear:both was missed somwhere in there.
Excellent job!
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mganschow@tmcc.edu | 673-8200 ext.5-2173
Re: Project 2 - Final
Great site. I like the layout and the colors are bright and cheery! Think your personal portfolio site works really well too. You are making orange juice look very appetizing!
Susie Lang
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So pretty and eye-catching!
I'm sure they would be proud to be owners of such a site! I love your choice of color and layout, clean cut and informative!
I like what you've done with the place!
I'm sure they would be proud to be owners of such a site! I love your choice of color and layout, clean cut and informative!
I like what you've done with the place!
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Re: Project 2 - Final
Wow Erica, this turned out awesome!
Love the color scheme and your use of imagery, your layout works nicely
in the browser window too!
Don't have much to say regarding what you might change, love it!
Love the color scheme and your use of imagery, your layout works nicely
in the browser window too!
Don't have much to say regarding what you might change, love it!
Cheers,
Hannah Selvey
Hannah Selvey
Re: Project 2 - Final
Hi,
The website designs came out solid and very clean. They are both professional. The OJ site design is fun and inviting. It functions well and looks pleasing.
The website designs came out solid and very clean. They are both professional. The OJ site design is fun and inviting. It functions well and looks pleasing.
Melissa Peel
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Both sites are incredibly eye-catching and feel so nice to look at! I adore the layout and organization of both!
My only criticism is that, on your OJ site, the navbar is hard to read and gets lost compared to the other navigation buttons on the right-hand side. Maybe switch the typefaces in both around, or make both that gloriously bold one? Or merely increase the size of the type on the navbar.
My only criticism is that, on your OJ site, the navbar is hard to read and gets lost compared to the other navigation buttons on the right-hand side. Maybe switch the typefaces in both around, or make both that gloriously bold one? Or merely increase the size of the type on the navbar.
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Re: Project 2 - Final
Hey,
Both came out great! I love the creative bright layout you used!
Both came out great! I love the creative bright layout you used!
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Brianna Mick
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I love the colors you picked for your site. The orange and blue are very cheerful and work well with the orange juice theme. The bottom bar on the Products page moves around the layout a bit.
Cassandra Bowers
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Hello, Erika
Great work on both designs, I really enjoy looking at your project 2 design very clean and organized this a very nice concept to use on your portafolio design great job.
Great work on both designs, I really enjoy looking at your project 2 design very clean and organized this a very nice concept to use on your portafolio design great job.
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Marco Horta
Marco Horta