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by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:00 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 preliminary designs
Replies: 13
Views: 2504

Re: Project 2 preliminary designs

Both are really good, I think I'm leaning more towards the second one since it has more of the old western feel to it.
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 7:58 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 2423

Re: Project Two Prelim

Both are good design but I think the first one works the best. Its simple, easy to read, and looks easy to navigate.
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 7:57 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique #2
Replies: 15
Views: 2271

Re: Preliminary Critique #2

Your second design is absolutely beautiful. I love the fonts that you used!
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 7:55 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: preliminary
Replies: 13
Views: 2445

Re: preliminary

The blue design works better. I like the images you used but feel you could use more images that showcase the student's work and maybe add a little bit more to the banner so it's not just a gradient. Also the color of your type on your navigation bar is a little too bright. Maybe darken it up a litt...
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 7:51 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Prelim Project 2
Replies: 14
Views: 2300

Re: Prelim Project 2

I love everything about this! The only thing I can suggest is to maybe make the type a little bit bigger.
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 7:50 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: [Project 2] Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 2218

Re: [Project 2] Preliminary

I feel I like the green one better just because I could read it better. I think its funny how every page is the same, but i feel its still missing that "charm" that made zombocom so funny. You just have text and the whole idea behind zombocom was to wait for a website that was never going ...
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 7:42 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project two Layout Roughs
Replies: 14
Views: 2122

Re: Project two Layout Roughs

The first design works better. I like how the first thing i see is their really nice campus. Maybe add more images though, you have a lot of body copy for your home page.
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 7:40 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 rough
Replies: 9
Views: 1469

Re: Project 2 rough

the first image seems to work the best. It's simple but appealing. The second page just feels a little too busy and with all the images grouped together in the bottom left corner and a huge paragraph to the right. Maybe break it up with text and images in columns to help with that.
by darian_p
Wed Nov 01, 2017 7:36 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 2172

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio

I feel the first design is the strongest. I kind of feels like a national geographic magazine.
by darian_p
Wed Oct 25, 2017 10:25 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 2265

Project 2 Roughs

So here are my two designs for project 2. I personally like the first version the best although I think I might use the navigation bar from the second version. Also please keep in mind that I don't have the banner done. The original website didn't have much when it came to images of any kind ironica...