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- Wed Sep 20, 2017 3:38 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2013
Re: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel
Peelio, Both are good concepts. I prefer the first one because I like the centered and focus of the content along with the style of text and color background. The only thing I would say to adjust/improve is the background itself to give the viewer an idea of what's going on back there. I have to say...
- Wed Sep 20, 2017 3:12 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project one
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2466
Re: project one
JulianEmme, Usually i'd go for the first home page because of its atmospherics, but I think the second home page is the way to go on this one. It's subtle, but also interesting and has to do with the choice of type and image: and usually i'd say to justify your type, but for this particular design y...
- Wed Sep 20, 2017 2:57 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project 1-preliminary critique
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2212
Re: project 1-preliminary critique
Marco_Horta1,
I'm going withe second one as apposed to the first because it has more expression and the images are better played out. Just remember to align and justify your type.
I'm going withe second one as apposed to the first because it has more expression and the images are better played out. Just remember to align and justify your type.
- Tue Sep 19, 2017 11:41 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Critique
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2222
Re: Project One Critique
susielang, The second home page has a really good layout and type styles. We've talked about including warm colors so the only thing I can add to that is too perhaps had near black or black curved boxes behind the links above so they aren't just floating there. Aside from that good stuff and don't f...
- Tue Sep 19, 2017 10:57 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2195
Re: Preliminary Critique
breezy,
I really enjoy your first home page. It has nice colors and repeating elements, and I really like the layout. All I can say is to justify your text and improve the difference in terms of contrast with the headline and the bubbles behind it.
Jose Macias.
I really enjoy your first home page. It has nice colors and repeating elements, and I really like the layout. All I can say is to justify your text and improve the difference in terms of contrast with the headline and the bubbles behind it.
Jose Macias.
- Tue Sep 19, 2017 10:38 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: [Project 1] Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2011
Re: [Project 1] Preliminary
SerenDark, Honestly you can go with either one. They're both strong concepts and they seem to be at least 75% done with each so you're not far from the finished product. I prefer the first one. Adding some white, I think will improve the dimension of it all and the bottom half seem to be filled with...
- Tue Sep 19, 2017 10:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Meow (That's cat speak for "Here's my work")
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2377
Re: Meow (That's cat speak for "Here's my work")
darian_p,
The first design is most definitely the way to go on this one. The use of color, layout, and composition work extremely well, so there's not much to say. The very view things to improve on is to stay off the edge with the title and to justify your text.
Jose Macias.
The first design is most definitely the way to go on this one. The use of color, layout, and composition work extremely well, so there's not much to say. The very view things to improve on is to stay off the edge with the title and to justify your text.
Jose Macias.
- Tue Sep 19, 2017 10:05 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1, First Critique
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2253
Re: Project 1, First Critique
cheytothet, The second home page is the way to go. The first one is too clunky and the font style doesn't fir the theme, but the second one is the opposite of that (less is more). It has a such simplistic but inviting approach to it that it feels like being welcomed to a home. The colors are great a...
- Tue Sep 19, 2017 9:41 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2256
Re: Project 1
Pearl_Martens, The first home page is still missing too much content for the viewer to grasp the idea as a whole, so i'm leaning more towards the second one. I enjoy the theme, it's different from the rest of the home pages i've seen, so it's a good start. The content is floating so there needs to b...
- Tue Sep 19, 2017 12:26 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2249
Re: Project 1 - Preliminary
erika.murray,
Both designs are strong in terms of color combination and layout. The only thing i can say to improve on is to align and justify your type.
Jose Macias.
Both designs are strong in terms of color combination and layout. The only thing i can say to improve on is to align and justify your type.
Jose Macias.