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by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:19 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 rough draft files
Replies: 13
Views: 2084

Re: Project 3 rough draft files

TMCC green!! I like that you are connecting the college color and the mascot with your designs. Lots of nice imagery. Overall, I think you may have too much green though, which is why I really like your third design. The white space along with the computers and program icons makes your layout look c...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:16 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project III Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 14
Views: 2208

Re: Project III Roughs, by Francisco

I love the unity in both of your themes. I also like that you tied in the marketing campaign of the college. The solid color overlays on the images really caught my eye, and I think I prefer this design over the other. The Reno design is really eye-catching and vibrant, but the first design fits bet...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:13 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2076

Re: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique

I am really liking how clean and straightforward these designs are. They allow the user to easily navigate through information. Your first design is better in terms of navigability, but I think you should bring in the Program Focuses and Degrees and Certificates bars to the first design. The first d...
by erika.murray
Wed Nov 22, 2017 2:41 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 - Prelim
Replies: 12
Views: 2188

Project 3 - Prelim

Hi everyone! It's hard to believe we're already down to the last few weeks of the semester. I have two completely different designs for critique. The first design is blocky and minimalist with bold colors (TMCC's 583C included). The second design is more abstract, featuring playful purple and turquo...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:54 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 up and running!
Replies: 11
Views: 2206

Re: Project 2 up and running!

Home page is beautiful! If you really wanted to change anything, add a different shade of blue in the middle bar. The school website turned out great! I like the changes from the prelim critique. The homepage image works well against the black. You could take away those dashed borders and add transp...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:49 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 11
Views: 2209

Re: Project 2 Final

Great job decluttering a cluttered website! The choice of blue works really nicely with the photos you've chosen. I like that the content scrolls while the footer stays at the bottom of your page as you scroll. I wish that you would have incorporated different weights of your fonts. I don't think th...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:44 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 11
Views: 2288

Re: Project 2 Final

Home page colors are so bold and beautiful! I love your Salon website! The bright orange with black and white photos gives it a really cool style. Love the title on the homepage that sits on both sides of the woman. One thing to add would be to add a navigation bar on the top of each page like you h...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:39 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 11
Views: 2370

Re: Project 2 Final

Home page is looking great! Love the colors. You did an excellent job of recreating the Yale Art website. I love the header image mixed with black and white images. A few things to change -- switch up the black and white photos on each page; make it so that when you click on the links it doesn't ope...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:34 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2..Maybe?
Replies: 11
Views: 2257

Re: Project 2..Maybe?

Your CMYK personal page is so nice! And that is such a cute photo.

The Midtown Printing site looks professional, clean, and organized! I like the blue with black and white color scheme. The only thing I would add is to put another photo on the services page. Everything looks great. Good job!
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project #2
Replies: 11
Views: 2205

Re: Project #2

Your home page is looking good, could use a bit more than neon green and the serif typeface. Really liking your videogame site! The colors and 8-bit style are working nicely. I did notice that your buttons double up, I'm assuming they were only supposed to be on one line. Good job making a website w...