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- Tue Oct 31, 2017 3:56 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
- Replies: 13
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Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
I would go with the second or third one, I feel like an organic sugar company wouldn't want to focus on the industrial aspect of sweetener production or the candy/sweets side. The typographic choices you made are working really well, as well as the colors. Good job dude!
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 3:49 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 preliminary designs
- Replies: 13
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Re: Project 2 preliminary designs
I like the second one better, the only suggestion I would have is making the buttons larger as well ass making the image larger, there's a little too much empty space. The first one is cool, but the homepage and inner page don't feel as unified.
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 3:42 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Roughs
- Replies: 12
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Re: Project 2 Roughs
I agree with you that the first is stronger but the navigation from the second is better, the pink and white fits really well, the images are good and the type works really well. Good job!
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 3:36 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 rough
- Replies: 13
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Re: Project 2 rough
These are both good ideas for a kid site, the only thing is that the inner pages don't feel like they belong to the homepages. The second homepage has a good unified feel to it, for the inner one maybe stick to the purple you used in the homepage instead of the green and also use a similar font so i...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 3:31 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
- Replies: 15
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Re: Project 2 Preliminary
I like the typographical organization of the second one but the photos of the first one better, a combination of the two would be dope. The colors work really well and so do the typefaces, good job! I'm not sure if you need the image that separates the dragon image and the type? maybe just make ever...
- Tue Oct 31, 2017 3:18 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
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Re: Preliminary Critique
The second one is definitely cool but the colors are a little overbearing so I would go with the first one. My only suggestion would be to not use the colors of the crest on the type? The colors just don't fit that well together, but I'm not sure just something to play with
- Thu Oct 26, 2017 10:28 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: preliminary
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2448
preliminary
Here are my two versions with pages. I was doing the Yale Art School site, since it's an art school I figured I would try to make it edgy, artsy and weird. It was a little difficult since the site just went down and I couldn't remember what information to include.
- Mon Oct 09, 2017 4:58 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Final
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2444
Re: Project One Final
It still feels a little unconnected, I'm not sue I understand what exactly you're going for, and that neon green is a little overpowering The illustration is cool though.
- Mon Oct 09, 2017 4:57 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio
- Replies: 15
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Re: Project 1 -Final Design by Peelio
I love how this came out, the vibrance in the M is perfect! I don't really have any suggestions, looks great!
- Sun Oct 08, 2017 6:30 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project one
- Replies: 13
- Views: 1621
project one
Here is my final, I had a really hard time deciding which one to do of my two layouts. They were both different and fun in their own way. I believe this one captures my style better. I left my hard drive in Reno over the weekend and haven't backed up my files yet so it's a few late.