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by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:17 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Preliminary Critique #3
Replies: 14
Views: 2323

Re: Preliminary Critique #3

I think the top one is better designed but that image seems disconnected from anything without a proper explanation. To be honest when I see your poster without context, and the clock it says to me; "This program will take a shit ton of time and energy." which isn't really the goal I think...
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:14 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 2620

Re: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique

I really love the typography on the first one, the second has a cool swipe element but I feel like it was used too much, seems overbearing, I would combine the two but use that cool swipe graphic sparingly, just as a punch of coolness.
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:12 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: prelim_#3
Replies: 15
Views: 2408

Re: prelim_#3

Shrink the navigation so it only takes up the header image, i like the transparency. The grey bottom is very boring, just make it white and play with your typography.
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:10 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 14
Views: 2418

Re: Project 3 Prelim

The second ones seem less crowded but the green gradient isnt working.
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:09 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 2591

Re: Project 3 prelim

The first one seems less... extreme I guess. I like that it feels more TMCC to me.
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:08 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 2537

Re: Project 3 Prelim

Hard to choose becuase they are all visually similar, but the second has nice header quality, I would not use the translucent box and just go with simple white.
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:07 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
Replies: 16
Views: 2642

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#3

I like the square bounding box around the text on the first one, I would work on the background image however, your current image is too busy, I would either find an image that has very little information (stuff) where that text will be (like a blue sky with no clouds or some kind of ground) or you ...
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:03 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: your thoughts? prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 2595

Re: your thoughts? prelim

I'm liking the idea of the first one but it seems a bit cluttered. Also obscuring the navigation text is a bad idea. Having a cool looking website is a goal, but the main objective is to have the information very accessible and easy to find.
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:01 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: prelim Three
Replies: 16
Views: 2727

Re: prelim Three

The second one (pen) seems like a more developed idea, I don't understand the pen and water connection but if you had some ink staining the water, making a cool design, it may connect them better.
by Blackfïsk
Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:00 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: prelim
Replies: 14
Views: 2434

Re: prelim

I like the Bottom one only because it seems minimalistic but its really really rough and the placement of text seems arbitrary.