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- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:17 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Preliminary Critique #3
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2323
Re: Preliminary Critique #3
I think the top one is better designed but that image seems disconnected from anything without a proper explanation. To be honest when I see your poster without context, and the clock it says to me; "This program will take a shit ton of time and energy." which isn't really the goal I think...
- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:14 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2620
Re: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique
I really love the typography on the first one, the second has a cool swipe element but I feel like it was used too much, seems overbearing, I would combine the two but use that cool swipe graphic sparingly, just as a punch of coolness.
- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:12 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: prelim_#3
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2408
Re: prelim_#3
Shrink the navigation so it only takes up the header image, i like the transparency. The grey bottom is very boring, just make it white and play with your typography.
- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:10 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2418
Re: Project 3 Prelim
The second ones seem less crowded but the green gradient isnt working.
- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:09 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2591
Re: Project 3 prelim
The first one seems less... extreme I guess. I like that it feels more TMCC to me.
- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:08 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2537
Re: Project 3 Prelim
Hard to choose becuase they are all visually similar, but the second has nice header quality, I would not use the translucent box and just go with simple white.
- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:07 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2642
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
I like the square bounding box around the text on the first one, I would work on the background image however, your current image is too busy, I would either find an image that has very little information (stuff) where that text will be (like a blue sky with no clouds or some kind of ground) or you ...
- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:03 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: your thoughts? prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2595
Re: your thoughts? prelim
I'm liking the idea of the first one but it seems a bit cluttered. Also obscuring the navigation text is a bad idea. Having a cool looking website is a goal, but the main objective is to have the information very accessible and easy to find.
- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:01 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: prelim Three
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2727
Re: prelim Three
The second one (pen) seems like a more developed idea, I don't understand the pen and water connection but if you had some ink staining the water, making a cool design, it may connect them better.
- Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:00 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: prelim
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2434
Re: prelim
I like the Bottom one only because it seems minimalistic but its really really rough and the placement of text seems arbitrary.