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- Thu Oct 23, 2014 8:28 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2896
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
I be honest in is kinda hard to comment when there is not much there, lets see some more of your work!!
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 8:25 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2523
Re: 1st roughs for project 2 for prelim critique
I very like the images and the way you made the circle button imges on the button in the upper rough, looks cool. I might think about taking the text of the zoo name in green and typing it the same it is in logo, or taking it away coplitly. also consider about deliting one logo and two zoo names, si...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 8:19 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2323
Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
great cleaning from original ste, its so bad I cant belive its up lol...good start on laouts, I like the black copasion better so far, lets see it with pics for more cooments
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 7:45 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Roughs2_by_Amy
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2976
Re: Roughs2_by_Amy
Thank you everyone for a great comments, I good some great feedback on how to make this better!
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 7:33 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2681
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Roughs
Beautiful work, both of them are good changes! But the brown version is just too good!!! I defenetly would go with that one. There is nothing that I would change, it all works great. Myabe you can drop the transepersy of the text boses a little bet more to better see a the interesting shape of the t...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 7:29 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project #2_Roughs
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2470
Re: Project #2_Roughs
they both look very fun, over all I do like the oreall consept ot the rought2, but I do like the header image much better on rough 1, that picture is just to cute!! great start!!
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 7:24 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2711
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
I like the rought 2 option, I like the header. I would play with the fond options. Maybe use the fond from the buttons on the rought 1 in your rought two. I like the fond of you navigational buttons in rought 1) good start!
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 7:15 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 19
- Views: 3206
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Wow, what a great change you page. I think there is no brainer wich one to pick the page2 looks amazing!!! Very creative idea, great image, great sticky note idea with the writing. I like everything about the site. there is nothing I would change. Very good start!!
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 7:09 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project #2
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2661
Re: project #2
Great change, the origina site was one of the worst I seen lol...I like the rought4 , looks great, on the second page I might make the picture and the text alight together and have a outline of the box same as text to tighet better to the page, or u can just bloor the edges. Also great logo design!
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 7:02 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2967
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project 2 - CP
I wasn't sure what is your original site that you changed to copare your work too, but so far you have a good start on your site. Evertyhing work, but I might change your navigational buttons to all capital latters and maybe make little boxses around them to pop out. Good start!