Search found 55 matches
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Jeremy's roughs for project 1
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2712
Re: Jeremy's roughs for project 1
Hi Jeremy~ I like design one the best. I feel that the monocromatic look is very crisp and clean, and the black and white photo of you is great. I also like the gradients you have used and the button glass look is very effective. If it was me, I'd take a look at the last paragraph of text; I know yo...
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 6:33 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3855
Re: Project 1
Hi Martin~ Well it is very obvious you have talent as a graphic artist. The anime theme for the first design is super cool; the images you have drawn could be used in commercial work they are so good. I also like the color choices very much. The only suggestion I have is to make the links uniform: u...
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 6:20 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: mark pederson project 1 roughs
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3110
Re: mark pederson project 1 roughs
Hi Mark~ I like that you referenced the research you did in your comments, I can tell that both designs were well-thought out. I think design one is the stronger of the two designs. The use of the building graphic you created is super creative and I like that the 'building blocks' of the graphic use...
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 6:00 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Aharon Williams project one preliminary critique
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3768
Re: Aharon Williams project one preliminary critique
Hi Aharon~ I'm leaning towards design one. I like the handwriting font you've selected and I feel the gray scale colors are effective and impart a classic, almost retro feel. Using true graphic links is an often overlooked design choice and I wholeheartedly support your use of them on your site. The...
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 5:46 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Critique Project 1 Rachel Mosley
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3642
Re: Preliminary Critique Project 1 Rachel Mosley
Hi there~ So I'm leaning towards design two. I really like the use of the oversized picture of you and the 'thought bubble' that encloses your logo. The logo itself is really cool too. Other elements such as the color palette and overall layout are impressive. I would have liked to see where and how...
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 5:21 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Roughs - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3621
Re: Project One Roughs - Preliminary Critique
Hi Donna~ I am having a difficult time choosing between the two designs. Both are very appealing in different ways. The first design is super cohesive and I love the vanishing perspective of the photograph you have chosen. Plus, the use of primary colors really looks good in contrast with the black ...
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 4:59 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Prelim Crit
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3690
Re: Prelim Crit
Hi ~ Well both of your designs make a bold statement.On the first one, the black background and white text are striking, as is the way you've set off the film strip with the red shadow. One suggestion I have is it would enhance readability if you made the paragraph text into two columns instead of o...
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 4:49 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2732
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi ~ So I like the first design better, although I seem to be the odd-man out on this. What I like about it is the color palette, very good choices -- they colors seem to complement each other well. Also, I think the picture frame around the dog is really cool. The site also needs a picture of you, ...
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 1:29 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project 1 layouts
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3761
Re: project 1 layouts
Hello~ I like design one; the 'cmck' is a creative idea. The 3 large images are also nice and balanced, and the large size is visually appealing and yet doesn't compete with the 'cmck' logo -- all of the page elements gel together nicely.The only thing I'd change is the way you've used the Facebook ...
- Sun Feb 17, 2013 1:08 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Cristina's Roughs for Project One
- Replies: 19
- Views: 3268
Re: Cristina's Roughs for Project One
Hello~ Well I like both designs, but if I had to pick I'd go with the second one. I really like the image you've chosen and I think the white on black theme is effective. The suggestion I have for this design is that the letter spacing feels too crammed together for my taste, both on the paragraph t...