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- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:40 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Prelim Project 2
- Replies: 14
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Re: Prelim Project 2
I like your second design better. I like how you added the grey bar over the whole layout and your use of black and white with only one color. Maybe make the "about" on the about page a bit bigger, or use the font you used for the title.
- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:37 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2182
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
I like the first design. I like the yellow color you used and the layout with the animal pictures on the side. Maybe make the "donate" button a bit bigger.
- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:33 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 rough
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1481
Re: Project 2 rough
I like the second design. I like the font you picked for it and the background image. Maybe move the . in .org so its not touching the "m" in the title.
- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:29 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: [Project 2] Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2240
Re: [Project 2] Preliminary
I like the top layout. The top one is more mysterious and the bottom one is easier to read, which I think for a site like this isn't really needed. The only critique I have is spacing the navigation bar out more evenly in the red and black design.
- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:22 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique #2
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2290
Re: Preliminary Critique #2
I like your chalkboard design more. I think it works really well for a school. I like the type you picked for the top and the white chalk line under it. Maybe make the "Home" and "events" type the same size.
- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:17 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project Two Prelim
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2432
Re: Project Two Prelim
I like your first design, it looks very professional. I like the gold color you chose for your navigation bar. Maybe make the nav bar stretch across the page more.
- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:14 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2194
Re: Preliminary Critique
I like the first layout. The navigation bar is really cool! The website looks very professional and easy to navigate. Maybe make the logo a bit bigger.
- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:10 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2247
Re: Project 2-Preliminary
I like the dark design I think it looks more interesting and fits the theme of the game better. I like the background you chose for it. Maybe make the type on the nav bar a little smaller so they aren't so close to the edges. Also the title of the game is missing from the dark layouts.
- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:04 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2245
Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
I like both designs equally. They are both really fun and look way better than the original site. I like the happy little fruits and the rainbow heart in the first design. Maybe make the apple on the navigation bar a darker red so it is easier to see, it blends in with the nav bar a little bit.
- Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:01 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2675
Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
I like the first design with all the circles. The colors you chose are very bright, and vibrant and work good for advertising orange juice. Maybe make the type on the nav bar a little bigger.