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by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:27 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 2 link
Replies: 11
Views: 2278

Re: project 2 link

Home page is looking good. You could push the typefaces a little more, they are looking somewhat basic and I feel like it should match more with your really cool GRC logo. As for the product website, you did a nice job cleaning up that wall of text! I really like the products page and the layout. Ag...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:25 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two Live Websites, by Francisco
Replies: 12
Views: 2467

Re: Project Two Live Websites, by Francisco

Your home page is really incredible - the color, imagery, and typefaces are cool. You’ve got some nice things going on and it really fits with your message and who you are. Your menu pop up is something I want to learn! You did a great job with unifying the sugar company’s page. I do think the photo...
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:16 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 10
Views: 2122

Re: Project 2 Final

I like how the black and white photo stays static when you scroll up and down on your home page! The background is very calming. Your ghost town website has a really cool theme to it. I’m not sure if all of your buttons lead to pages (maybe they broke like you mentioned), but great job!
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 17, 2017 2:12 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: [Project 2] Live and running!
Replies: 14
Views: 2768

Re: [Project 2] Live and running!

Your home page looks awesome! When viewing in chrome I do see some type running off the boxes, but overall the layout is very clean and magical. As for Zombo.com, I’m glad that you went with the green layout. The zombie gif is a nice addition!
by erika.murray
Fri Nov 10, 2017 2:27 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 - Final
Replies: 11
Views: 2347

Project 2 - Final

Hi everyone! My websites are up and ready for your viewing. For my Project 2 website, I decided to go with my first layout. It seemed that the orange graphic was what caught people's attention. The sites are best viewed with Firefox and Safari. Let me know what you think! http://www.grc175.com/stude...
by erika.murray
Wed Nov 01, 2017 6:04 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 2178

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio

Both of these layouts do a great job of redesigning the original site. I like the lion layout the best. The colors work well together, and the typefaces are nice. The column of animal photos works well. Everything is really neat. One thing to improve is to make the sponsor logos smaller and make it ...
by erika.murray
Fri Oct 27, 2017 10:15 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project_2_roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 2335

Re: project_2_roughs

Good job recreating this site! I think your second layout is stronger. There is nice balance between the four images and the navigation is clear. Instead of repeating the homepage images on the inner page, take one image and make it larger.
by erika.murray
Fri Oct 27, 2017 10:12 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
Replies: 14
Views: 2243

Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique

I like the rainbow layout because the type is more organized, but I also like the pear layout because the color is more subtle. Maybe if you brought in the white rectangle that you have in your pear layout to the rainbow layout it will give more contrast? Or the background of the rainbow layout coul...
by erika.murray
Fri Oct 27, 2017 10:08 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project two Layout Roughs
Replies: 14
Views: 2126

Re: Project two Layout Roughs

I love the color choice, it makes the site look more scholarly! I like the first homepage better but the type might be hard to read. The layout of the first inner page is neat. If you took that image from behind the photos of the staff and used it as a slider image on the first homepage and moved th...
by erika.murray
Fri Oct 27, 2017 10:04 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2
Replies: 12
Views: 2462

Re: Project 2

I like that you cleaned up the text compared to the original website. The horses at the top are a nice addition as well, though I would only put one on each side. Move the body text on the homepage closer to the slider image. Looking forward to seeing your second design!