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by Jose_M
Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:42 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 2526

Re: Preliminary Critique

selvester5000, The first one reminds me the HI FRUCTOSE magazine, which are pretty cool and you should perhaps check them out for inspiration, but yes you're right it does look like a magazine. I'm leaning more towards the second one because of the overall design, but it seems as if you have two hom...
by Jose_M
Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:29 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Critique _Lea
Replies: 16
Views: 2092

Re: Project One Critique _Lea

Ltrueworthy, The space home page is a lot better. It looks more like a web page more than the second one because it has a stronger layout and color combination. What it needs to improve on is font styles because the current font styles are flat and don't do you any justice. If you decide to go with ...
by Jose_M
Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs
Replies: 18
Views: 2394

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Roughs

ktwy, I'm not a fan of the first so I'd go with the second one. The second home page has a good start to it with its use of colors, font style, and layout. The one thing to change is having the rest of the links white as well because it creates an anomaly that isn't necessary for thing particular de...
by Jose_M
Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:56 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1-Preliminary
Replies: 16
Views: 2272

Re: Project 1-Preliminary

Kyler, Both home pages are still in the skeletal structure of the design, but the note book concept is actually pretty cool and it would be interesting to see what the layout and composition of the final would look like, some research will help with that. Adding some soft colors will help you design...
by Jose_M
Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:44 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 16
Views: 2105

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

CarnutianDragon,
The forest theme home page is the one to go with in my opinion because the layout and composition work very well and is friendly to the eye. The one thing to change is the script font style for the links and the word "nemophilist".


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:30 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 preliminary designs
Replies: 17
Views: 2252

Re: Project 1 preliminary designs

Cassie, If I were to lean on one it would be the second home page because it has a powerful use of asymmetrical balance, which is what you were going for. The color and imagery balance each other very well and I like the background image, it adds an atmospheric feel to it. The few things you should ...
by Jose_M
Sun Sep 17, 2017 7:50 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Aries Project 1
Replies: 18
Views: 2351

Re: Aries Project 1

Aries, The concept for both are visually interesting, or eye candy as some people call it, and you can go with either one, but the things that need improvement are the location of the logo and the title. The title needs to pop up more. Also the low opacity boxes behind the text seem uninteresting an...
by Jose_M
Sun Sep 17, 2017 7:05 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 19
Views: 2420

Re: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco

Francisco,
The color combination and layout work really well on the second one. The things you should consider in changing is the location of the logo and filling the circles with the body copy.

Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Wed Sep 13, 2017 10:16 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: GRC 175-2001 project 1
Replies: 17
Views: 2196

GRC 175-2001 project 1

Hello, my name is Jose and this is the preliminary critique for project 1. The inspirational web pages that I used were "gearsofwar.com" and "burzum.org" and I used them not because of their design but rather their page layout and interaction. The first home page is "project...
by Jose_M
Fri Sep 01, 2017 9:58 am
Forum: Introductions
Topic: GRC 175-2001
Replies: 2
Views: 674

GRC 175-2001

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