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by Jose_M
Wed Nov 01, 2017 2:38 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 rough
Replies: 9
Views: 1473

Project 2 rough

So the website I decided to redesign is burzum.org. This website is about promoting the band "BURZUM" and a certain belief/ideology, which is paganism. I went with a design that is simplistic and easy to navigate compared to the original website because it is crammed with information. Same...
by Jose_M
Wed Nov 01, 2017 2:28 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project two Layout Roughs
Replies: 14
Views: 2123

Re: Project two Layout Roughs

Ariesboxsye,
The first web-page works better. It is laid out well and the color scheme seems to work. The only thing to adjust/change/improve/include is the open space in the top, it's too distracting and can use some kind of filling.


Jose_Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 30, 2017 6:09 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project_2_roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 2332

Re: project_2_roughs

Marco_Horta1,
The first design for the second concept (design_2) works better; it is laid out better and is Moore organized compared to the other three designs. The only thing to change (in the particular case) is the font style for the links, they shouldn't match the logo.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:51 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
Replies: 14
Views: 2197

Re: Project 2-Preliminary

Kyler_Rose,
I assume both are for video games. Either way you have to establish the subject matter. I'd have to go with the darker webpage because it has better images and a good start with the nav bar.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:46 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 2174

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio

Peelio,
I think these are both strong designs and there isn't anything for me to tell you to change or adjust. Everything is nice and crisp and easy to read and navigate. Two thumbs up.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:42 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
Replies: 14
Views: 2242

Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique

Ltrueworthy, Well in terms of design I'd go with the first one. The trouble I find myself in with this one is, it is difficult to establish the subject matter. It is hard to figure out what this website is for and I have to view it in full detail just to get an idea of what I'm looking at. To help e...
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:34 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 14
Views: 2588

Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique

erika.murray,
The overall design works well as a whole, the colors are fragrant and is easy to read and navigate. The main thing to adjust would be the navigation bar, it's too simple and easy to miss; perhaps using a bolder type style would help.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:29 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 preliminary designs
Replies: 13
Views: 2548

Re: Project 2 preliminary designs

Cassiebowers, I like the second design better although I think the first one captures the subject matter a lot better along with the images and type style and layout. If you go with the first one, you should do some edits to the white fade above the cowboys, it makes it a little too obvious that it'...
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:19 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 2190

Re: Preliminary Critique

ktwy, I like the subject matter of the website, I myself love to print. The greyscale images work very well with the white background and blue navigation bar. The logo is placed well and everything is easy to read. I know this is just a rough, but things to be included are "what kind of printin...
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:12 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2
Replies: 12
Views: 2461

Re: Project 2

Pearl_Underwood, I like the headline/type style and navigation. As a whole, your design captures the subject matter of the website. The few things to change are the right two silhouettes: the leaping horse should switch places with the one beside it and facing the other direction so that there is sy...