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by Ariesboxsye
Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel
Replies: 16
Views: 2006

Re: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel

Immediately I love both types, however I don't see much use of the first one across the rest of your page unless you change it up even more so than you have and that might over complicate the simple style it is. For the second one, I love the use of the background and negative space for your letter,...
by Ariesboxsye
Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:07 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 19
Views: 2419

Re: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco

While both are really nice and tight design styles, I recommend the second simply because of the more diverse ideas being played with. The use of color stands out the most of something I like in this, green and teal standing out among the dark theme background. The only thing I hope to see in the fu...
by Ariesboxsye
Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1, First Critique
Replies: 17
Views: 2250

Re: Project 1, First Critique

Choice number two in my opinion is more friendly in color scheme and setup. The light colors and flower like designs through the shapes give a positive response I feel. However, for each major shape, the rectangle and projects and such, I would recommend possible adding more shapes for each project ...
by Ariesboxsye
Mon Sep 18, 2017 4:59 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 18
Views: 2523

Re: Preliminary Critique

Hi Hannah, right away I am going to simply point to the second choice as one that I like. I like how you used asymmetrical balance in this design, while similar shapes are used to keep some amount of unity. The links on the side are confusing being side ways, it might cause some unreliability in som...
by Ariesboxsye
Wed Sep 13, 2017 2:05 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Aries Project 1
Replies: 18
Views: 2348

Aries Project 1

These are my project one layout concepts. My inspirations come from sources that i personally visit day to day for hobby reasons. http://na.finalfantasyxiv.com/benchmark/ This site's concept on how to move the navigation away from simply lining up at the top is something that drove some sketches and...
by Ariesboxsye
Mon Sep 04, 2017 5:05 pm
Forum: Introductions
Topic: Greetings and Salutations
Replies: 1
Views: 676

Greetings and Salutations

Greetings and Salutations My Name is Aries Shelley, graphic student and casual something or other, I have forgotten. I'm not one to describe myself as its a task I have not fully mastered, but I will try. My hobbies include art, writing, reading, and of coarse video games, but most of all I prefer a...