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- Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:12 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel
- Replies: 16
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Re: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique - Melissa Peel
Immediately I love both types, however I don't see much use of the first one across the rest of your page unless you change it up even more so than you have and that might over complicate the simple style it is. For the second one, I love the use of the background and negative space for your letter,...
- Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:07 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco
- Replies: 19
- Views: 2419
Re: Project 1 Roughs, by Francisco
While both are really nice and tight design styles, I recommend the second simply because of the more diverse ideas being played with. The use of color stands out the most of something I like in this, green and teal standing out among the dark theme background. The only thing I hope to see in the fu...
- Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:03 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1, First Critique
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2250
Re: Project 1, First Critique
Choice number two in my opinion is more friendly in color scheme and setup. The light colors and flower like designs through the shapes give a positive response I feel. However, for each major shape, the rectangle and projects and such, I would recommend possible adding more shapes for each project ...
- Mon Sep 18, 2017 4:59 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2523
Re: Preliminary Critique
Hi Hannah, right away I am going to simply point to the second choice as one that I like. I like how you used asymmetrical balance in this design, while similar shapes are used to keep some amount of unity. The links on the side are confusing being side ways, it might cause some unreliability in som...
- Wed Sep 13, 2017 2:05 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Aries Project 1
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2348
Aries Project 1
These are my project one layout concepts. My inspirations come from sources that i personally visit day to day for hobby reasons. http://na.finalfantasyxiv.com/benchmark/ This site's concept on how to move the navigation away from simply lining up at the top is something that drove some sketches and...
- Mon Sep 04, 2017 5:05 pm
- Forum: Introductions
- Topic: Greetings and Salutations
- Replies: 1
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Greetings and Salutations
Greetings and Salutations My Name is Aries Shelley, graphic student and casual something or other, I have forgotten. I'm not one to describe myself as its a task I have not fully mastered, but I will try. My hobbies include art, writing, reading, and of coarse video games, but most of all I prefer a...