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by ktwy
Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:50 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Box's Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 2062

Re: Box's Project 3 Preliminary

I prefer your second design. It looks very clean and easy to navigate. I might suggest that you pick a lighter green because the dark green dominates the page quite a bit.
by ktwy
Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:45 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project Three Critique _Lea
Replies: 13
Views: 2155

Re: Project Three Critique _Lea

The patterns in the second design are so eye-catching! I would try to narrow down your fonts so that you keep a consistent theme throughout the design. But yeah, the second one looks really good :)
by ktwy
Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:44 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project #3 ~ prelim
Replies: 12
Views: 2325

Re: Project #3 ~ prelim

Your second design definitely feels like it fits the assignment better than the first.
I like that you used a picture of Reno for your background, although the font for your bodycopy seems a bit too whimsical to be used in an academic setting.
by ktwy
Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:41 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 1977

Re: Project 3 Prelim

Oh my goodness, these are so cool! The second design is my favorite because the skeleton is very comical, and the crop marks around your type add a nice visual element to the piece without being too boxy. I would suggest making your type a few points bigger because it is a little hard to read. Nice ...
by ktwy
Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:37 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 rough draft files
Replies: 13
Views: 2107

Re: Project 3 rough draft files

Wow! Look at that rainbow font! So awesome! I agree with Erika about the green. I would suggest changing it to another tint or color, or using the white like in your third design. Personally, I really enjoy the horizontal navigation bar in your first design. Also, make sure your final says "Gra...
by ktwy
Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:31 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project III Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 14
Views: 2235

Re: Project III Roughs, by Francisco

Your top design has a very nice academic feel to it. I really like the hue in your images. I would just make sure to leave space for all your links, but other than that it looks awesome!
by ktwy
Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:29 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2106

Re: [Project 3] Preliminary Critique

I really like your second layout! The green theme flows really well, and you organized your content in a way that makes it very easy to understand. Great job!
by ktwy
Wed Nov 22, 2017 5:12 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: P3 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 2062

P3 Preliminary

Hi All~

Here are my 4 rough layouts.
In all honesty, I totally lost all my creative juices after the first one, so the second rough is not very exciting haha.

Let me know your thoughts! :)
by ktwy
Sat Nov 11, 2017 12:00 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2..Maybe?
Replies: 11
Views: 2257

Project 2..Maybe?

Yikes guys. This website is looking real rough, but hopefully it loaded so that you all can view its hideousness. I might go back in to smooth it out, but I'm having a bit of a beef with Dreamweaver so we'll see if that happens or not. My website is http://www.grc175.com/student/fall_2017/kristianna...
by ktwy
Wed Nov 01, 2017 5:02 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Prelim Project 2
Replies: 14
Views: 2327

Re: Prelim Project 2

These layouts are so beautiful and feminine~ The second style seems like it has more to do with hair, and the placement of the content makes more sense than the first. That being said, both are equally cool and inviting :)