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by rmiyashiro
Sun Feb 28, 2016 2:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Submission for P1
Replies: 13
Views: 2419

Re: Final Submission for P1

I love the earthy hues of this layout. The hues mixed with the texture make me feel very comfortable and relaxed, something I don't usually feel when I'm using technology. Good job!
by rmiyashiro
Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:57 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 14
Views: 2400

Re: Project 1 Final

The background image works well with your color scheme and adds great texture. The left to right gradient of the image also complements the movement and rhythm of your layout though it does make the text difficult to read.
by rmiyashiro
Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:50 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 15
Views: 2695

Re: Project 1 Final

Your new layout is terrific. The mountains guide the eye to the navigation and then the red 'greetings' captures my attention bringing me right to your body copy. It has a nice rhythm to it.
by rmiyashiro
Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:45 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1, Final Design
Replies: 13
Views: 2496

Re: Project 1, Final Design

The new location of your name and info works a lot better. The script font used for your name is particularly nice, but I prefer the grey scale version perhaps with a splash of color from the American flag and a bit of color from your jacket to balance it out.
by rmiyashiro
Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:38 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Critique_Project1_KO
Replies: 13
Views: 2263

Re: Final Critique_Project1_KO

The greyscale and text hierarchy work well, like Lauren says. You could try moving the navigation below the line and putting the class info in the upper right corner mimicking the movement of your name?
by rmiyashiro
Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:24 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: K Day-Z Project One Final
Replies: 14
Views: 2510

Re: K Day-Z Project One Final

Good color choices and nice background texture. The new font looks to have that 70's feel. I'm not sure about the line across the top. From right to left, once it gets to the 'gallery' navigation it could transition into a medium opacity paisley design.
by rmiyashiro
Sat Feb 27, 2016 8:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final Critique
Replies: 13
Views: 2493

Re: Project 1 Final Critique

The well-rendered cat in the corner keeps things balanced and brings attention to your email address. Nice jerb
by rmiyashiro
Sat Feb 27, 2016 8:35 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: final_project_01
Replies: 13
Views: 2298

Re: final_project_01

Nice layout. The image in the background adds good texture and holds interest. I would like to have seen some color in that stache though.
by rmiyashiro
Sat Feb 27, 2016 5:56 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 final
Replies: 15
Views: 2619

Re: Project 1 final

This layout has a nice directionality and unity to it. The color choices work well. Try using more legible fonts for your body.
by rmiyashiro
Sat Feb 27, 2016 5:50 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one Final
Replies: 13
Views: 2389

Re: Project one Final

The colors of your illustration pair well with the colors choices you've made in your layout. Your name and body copy just seem a bit close to the edge.