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- Sun Feb 28, 2016 2:03 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Final Submission for P1
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2419
Re: Final Submission for P1
I love the earthy hues of this layout. The hues mixed with the texture make me feel very comfortable and relaxed, something I don't usually feel when I'm using technology. Good job!
- Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:57 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Final
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2400
Re: Project 1 Final
The background image works well with your color scheme and adds great texture. The left to right gradient of the image also complements the movement and rhythm of your layout though it does make the text difficult to read.
- Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:50 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Final
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2695
Re: Project 1 Final
Your new layout is terrific. The mountains guide the eye to the navigation and then the red 'greetings' captures my attention bringing me right to your body copy. It has a nice rhythm to it.
- Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:45 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1, Final Design
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2496
Re: Project 1, Final Design
The new location of your name and info works a lot better. The script font used for your name is particularly nice, but I prefer the grey scale version perhaps with a splash of color from the American flag and a bit of color from your jacket to balance it out.
- Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:38 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Final Critique_Project1_KO
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2263
Re: Final Critique_Project1_KO
The greyscale and text hierarchy work well, like Lauren says. You could try moving the navigation below the line and putting the class info in the upper right corner mimicking the movement of your name?
- Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:24 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: K Day-Z Project One Final
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2510
Re: K Day-Z Project One Final
Good color choices and nice background texture. The new font looks to have that 70's feel. I'm not sure about the line across the top. From right to left, once it gets to the 'gallery' navigation it could transition into a medium opacity paisley design.
- Sat Feb 27, 2016 8:41 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Final Critique
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2493
Re: Project 1 Final Critique
The well-rendered cat in the corner keeps things balanced and brings attention to your email address. Nice jerb
- Sat Feb 27, 2016 8:35 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: final_project_01
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2298
Re: final_project_01
Nice layout. The image in the background adds good texture and holds interest. I would like to have seen some color in that stache though.
- Sat Feb 27, 2016 5:56 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 final
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2619
Re: Project 1 final
This layout has a nice directionality and unity to it. The color choices work well. Try using more legible fonts for your body.
- Sat Feb 27, 2016 5:50 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project one Final
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2389
Re: Project one Final
The colors of your illustration pair well with the colors choices you've made in your layout. Your name and body copy just seem a bit close to the edge.