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- Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:46 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2, Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2152
Re: Project 2, Preliminary Critique
Both are nicely designed. They have the feel of a website that is fully responsive, something I've though very little about in my designs. They have a winter whimsy that almost makes me want to go out in the snow.
- Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:42 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4439
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
While both designs are pleasant, your first layout is working better for me because the type is easier to read. If you adjusted the type of the second layout I'd prefer that one because the pictures of food are bigger.
- Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:37 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project #2 preliminary
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2116
Re: project #2 preliminary
Bolth layouts are warm and welcoming. The second one has more pictures and makes me more hungry so I would go with the second one because it has more pictures and makes me the hungriest.
- Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:33 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project Two, Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1951
Re: Project Two, Preliminary Critique
I agree with the aforementioned nature comments. The images you have are so vibrant and inviting. They work best as the dominant element of the page against the grey background.
- Sat Mar 19, 2016 10:40 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project 2 preliminary critique
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2938
Re: project 2 preliminary critique
While both designs have a natural, healthy feel to them, the first design works better for me. It feels more inviting yet professional. The only issue I have with it is the resolution of the picture on page 2, and, like Lauren said, the huge amount of text.
- Sat Mar 19, 2016 10:34 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Kaylyn Dazey Project @
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2322
Re: Kaylyn Dazey Project @
The second design works much better for me. All of the red in the first design makes me uncomfortable and makes it look like there's a bunch of ads. The lower opacity mountains of the second design also works better for me. That guy looks like NPH.
- Fri Mar 18, 2016 9:19 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary-finallly complete-sorry guys!
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2167
Re: Project 2 Preliminary-Mostly.....
Your first design is solid. The only thing I would change is the value of 'Por Favor.' It gets a little lost at it's current value.
- Thu Mar 17, 2016 6:00 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2424
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Use the first one. Stuff on fire is always interesting. I've never read any of her books and I think I've seen 2.5 of the 4 movies based on her famous series but she'd definitely like the first one the most.
- Thu Mar 17, 2016 4:40 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project2 preliminary critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1992
project2 preliminary critique
This is my first set of roughs for project2. I tried to go with their color scheme. I'm not sure the circles at the bottom work with it, but I added 'em for a bit o' humor. rough1_p0.jpg rough1_p1.jpg This is my second set. I went with different colors and a centered home page. rough2_p0.jpg rough2_...
- Sun Feb 28, 2016 2:06 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Final
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2384
Re: Project One Final
I'm so glad you chose this photo. It's so thought provoking and I love the symmetry of it and the symmetry of your layout. The text is definitely easier to read and the colors work well.