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by rmiyashiro
Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:46 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2, Preliminary Critique
Replies: 10
Views: 2152

Re: Project 2, Preliminary Critique

Both are nicely designed. They have the feel of a website that is fully responsive, something I've though very little about in my designs. They have a winter whimsy that almost makes me want to go out in the snow.
by rmiyashiro
Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:42 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 4439

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

While both designs are pleasant, your first layout is working better for me because the type is easier to read. If you adjusted the type of the second layout I'd prefer that one because the pictures of food are bigger.
by rmiyashiro
Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:37 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project #2 preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 2116

Re: project #2 preliminary

Bolth layouts are warm and welcoming. The second one has more pictures and makes me more hungry so I would go with the second one because it has more pictures and makes me the hungriest.
by rmiyashiro
Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:33 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two, Preliminary Critique
Replies: 10
Views: 1951

Re: Project Two, Preliminary Critique

I agree with the aforementioned nature comments. The images you have are so vibrant and inviting. They work best as the dominant element of the page against the grey background.
by rmiyashiro
Sat Mar 19, 2016 10:40 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 2 preliminary critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2938

Re: project 2 preliminary critique

While both designs have a natural, healthy feel to them, the first design works better for me. It feels more inviting yet professional. The only issue I have with it is the resolution of the picture on page 2, and, like Lauren said, the huge amount of text.
by rmiyashiro
Sat Mar 19, 2016 10:34 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Kaylyn Dazey Project @
Replies: 11
Views: 2322

Re: Kaylyn Dazey Project @

The second design works much better for me. All of the red in the first design makes me uncomfortable and makes it look like there's a bunch of ads. The lower opacity mountains of the second design also works better for me. That guy looks like NPH.
by rmiyashiro
Fri Mar 18, 2016 9:19 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary-finallly complete-sorry guys!
Replies: 11
Views: 2167

Re: Project 2 Preliminary-Mostly.....

Your first design is solid. The only thing I would change is the value of 'Por Favor.' It gets a little lost at it's current value.
by rmiyashiro
Thu Mar 17, 2016 6:00 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2424

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

Use the first one. Stuff on fire is always interesting. I've never read any of her books and I think I've seen 2.5 of the 4 movies based on her famous series but she'd definitely like the first one the most.
by rmiyashiro
Thu Mar 17, 2016 4:40 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project2 preliminary critique
Replies: 10
Views: 1992

project2 preliminary critique

This is my first set of roughs for project2. I tried to go with their color scheme. I'm not sure the circles at the bottom work with it, but I added 'em for a bit o' humor. rough1_p0.jpg rough1_p1.jpg This is my second set. I went with different colors and a centered home page. rough2_p0.jpg rough2_...
by rmiyashiro
Sun Feb 28, 2016 2:06 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 13
Views: 2384

Re: Project One Final

I'm so glad you chose this photo. It's so thought provoking and I love the symmetry of it and the symmetry of your layout. The text is definitely easier to read and the colors work well.