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by chaytothet
Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:26 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
Replies: 15
Views: 2169

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio

I love the focus on the lions, and the colors of the first choice. Like you said they are more sophisticated, and it really brings home the idea of lions on the savannah. Awesome job!
by chaytothet
Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:23 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 rough
Replies: 9
Views: 1463

Re: Project 2 rough

These look super nice! I personally like the first one better. It's super clean and easy to interpret. It leads your eyes right through the design.
by chaytothet
Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:19 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: [Project 2] Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 2213

Re: [Project 2] Preliminary

I like the first design, it seems cleaner, I think the light green of the second it a little too calming for the zombos lol
by chaytothet
Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Two Prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 2417

Re: Project Two Prelim

I like the second one best! If you are able to I would bulk up the font on the front of the picture so you can see it a bit easier, I know for seniors it would blend in or totally get lost, and those might be the exact ones you want spending money at the resort!
by chaytothet
Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:16 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 2182

Re: Preliminary Critique

Hey! Awesome job. These are super spiffy. I enjoy the second one better, it seems more too the point. I would maybe look at adding a complementary color in some letters if possible. Just to make it pop a little more.
by chaytothet
Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:14 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project two Layout Roughs
Replies: 14
Views: 2120

Re: Project two Layout Roughs

I like the clean lines of the first design, not too busy, but still shows the campus in all its glory!
by chaytothet
Wed Oct 25, 2017 1:55 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 14
Views: 2581

Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique

I always love the clean lines and organization of your stuff :) Personally, i like the second choice best, I like the variety of colors and the layout just seems more inviting. One thing I would look into is maybe substituting the circles from the first layout in for the squares in the second..? Hop...
by chaytothet
Wed Oct 25, 2017 1:52 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique #2
Replies: 15
Views: 2265

Preliminary Critique #2

Hey Guys! Here are my mockups for the new website, here is the original link: http://www.fernridge.k12.or.us/ This is the School District that I graduated from, I'm not sure their site has had an update since I graduated in 2010. Here are my Redesigns, I'm happier with the Blue version, but I'm open...
by chaytothet
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:26 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 15
Views: 2320

Re: Project One Final

I really like this layout, I have a few suggestions, but I'd like to start out with I really really like your layout, So I have a thought since you've already committed to the Lime green and it's really working for you, what if you were to convert all the imagery to a monochromatic lime green and us...
by chaytothet
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:22 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 14
Views: 1851

Re: Project 1 Final

To be honest, I have never liked the CMYK color scheme, it has always seemed super cliche and like a cop-out from choosing good complementary colors..

I'm happy to eat my words. This is stunning. Soft yet strong, and everything is in harmony.

I love this so much. GREAT job.