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by Stephski
Thu Feb 23, 2017 8:43 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Final Design
Replies: 8
Views: 1331

Project 1 - Final Design

Hello everyone, For Project 1, I have chosen to use a minimal design with a simple background texture a few images and little color. The typefaces I have used are: Ingra (Sans Serif) for the body and Essonnes (Serif) for the welcoming message. This portfolio is a single page and the navigation will ...
by Stephski
Mon Feb 13, 2017 2:55 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 1 Jared Harper
Replies: 8
Views: 1392

Re: project 1 Jared Harper

Hello! I enjoyed both designs and your minimalist approach. The first rough seems more appealing to me, the black and white theme looks great with the color you have chosen. The idea is original as well. Maybe, the content (text and pictures) should take up more of that space you have dedicated to i...
by Stephski
Thu Feb 09, 2017 8:54 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: rough_1 and rough_2
Replies: 6
Views: 1175

Re: rough_1 and rough_2

Hi Elizabeth, I think the second design works best, I like how large the illustration is. For that one, I would just make your email address stand out more. The first design is also interesting, I like the navigation bar and the typeface you used for your name. If you chose to go with that one, mayb...
by Stephski
Wed Feb 08, 2017 3:44 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 1286

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Hi Ivor, Both designs look great! The first one makes me think of Art Deco, the lines around your boxes and your typeface are perfect. It's clean and straightforward. How do you intend to design the content that will go in your boxes? Will they follow the black and white theme or will they be colorf...
by Stephski
Wed Feb 08, 2017 3:39 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Prelim Crit
Replies: 8
Views: 1311

Re: Project One Prelim Crit

Beautiful designs! I enjoyed both although if I had to choose, I would go with the first one. Your background image is great! I would suggest to make your navigation slightly bolder to differentiate it from the rest. The second design works well too, I really enjoy the layout, and the picture of boo...
by Stephski
Wed Feb 08, 2017 3:36 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 1310

Re: Project 1 - Preliminary Critique

Eduardo, The second design works best I think, I enjoy what you did with the background, it looks great! For that one I would just make your name stand out more, it blends in with the box behind it. The first design is very bright, but the contrast with the black bar at the top works well. Maybe the...
by Stephski
Wed Feb 08, 2017 3:31 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 1376

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Hi Sarah, I think your first design works better than the second. I love the antlers at the top, and the way your pictures will be displayed! I would only make the color of your navigation (texts) the color of the background of the body (the yellow or light brown). Your navigation bar in the second ...
by Stephski
Wed Feb 08, 2017 3:26 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project #1 - Preliminary Roughs
Replies: 10
Views: 1824

Re: Project #1 - Preliminary Roughs

Ed, Both designs are great, although I prefer the first one. I think the typeface you chose for your name is wonderful. I wouldn't change a thing on your Sophisticated page. The Techie page is very good looking as well, the navigation bar in particular. For that design I would only make your name st...
by Stephski
Wed Feb 08, 2017 3:22 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: prelim project 1
Replies: 8
Views: 1233

Re: prelim project 1

Grace, Your second design is amazing, I love the picture and colors! I struggle to find an element that needs to be changed, maybe make your email address the same color as your name? It would make it stand out even more. Great job! The first design is good as well but the second is my favorite :) Y...
by Stephski
Wed Feb 08, 2017 3:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project_1_home page
Replies: 8
Views: 1295

Re: project_1_home page

Hi Kevin, The first design is great, I like the simplicity of it and the color of your background! Will the artsy fonts remain that way for your navigation? Even though it looks cool, I thing the navigation is the one element that needs to be clear and straightforward. That is the only thing I would...