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- Fri Oct 27, 2017 10:01 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2408
Re: Preliminary Critique
Your first layout inner page is visually strong. I love the use of color for your second layout. It would be really cool if you took that colorful banner from your second layout and used it in place of the blue banners for your first layout. It would contrast nicely with the black and white photos. ...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 9:57 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Prelim Project 2
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2301
Re: Prelim Project 2
I love your black and white photos mixed with the orange type! Really catches the eye. I also love your use of space. Right now I am liking your second layout homepage best, and the inner page of your first layout. I think that you should use the image from your second inner page and use it like you...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 9:48 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2360
Re: Project 2 Preliminary
Very nice job, the visual interest is high with both of these layouts. I love the ripped away header image and the typefaces. I would go with your second layout because the type is more organized, although for the homepage you should bring in the image from the first homepage rough and add it to the...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 9:44 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 rough
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2538
Re: Project 2 rough
Your homepage ideas are nice and really capture that kid-friendly website. I think the blue layout works best in terms of the navigation, but I would like to see a image similar to the one from the rainbow layout (guy holding beaker instead of mesmerized guy with cat). Your inner pages feel a bit di...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 9:37 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2271
Re: Project 2 Roughs
Both of these layouts are great! I personally think the pink goes better with the white than the black. Your navigation is simple and easy. You may want to think about substituting a static image for the gallery on your homepage (like the one from the inner page) if it gets too busy. Since you have ...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 9:31 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2429
Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
Your stronger designs here are your 3rd and your 4th design. The 3rd design really speaks "nature" to the audience, and the 4th design has a really well put together layout. If you're going for the natural look, go with your 3rd design, and if you want to bring in more of the manufacturing...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 9:26 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: preliminary
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2447
Re: preliminary
Both of these layouts really capture the artsy and weird theme. I like the feel and colors of your second layout home page, but my eye was immediately drawn to your first layouts. The first layout is abstract and intriguing, and I think you should go with it. I would move the hand from the inner pag...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 9:21 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2197
Re: Project 2-Preliminary
The light layout is awesome! The color scheme and gradient background unify the logo nicely. The navigation is much better on this layout than the dark layout in terms of the video page. I would work on the type in relation to the character images -- specifically the first character on your light la...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 9:17 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: [Project 2] Preliminary
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2222
Re: [Project 2] Preliminary
The green layout has a nice color scheme and typeface choice. I also like the dropdown, as it makes the page focus on the text instead of the menu. Your dark layout is too eerie in my opinion, I wouldn't necessarily think "humor" if I saw it. For the green layout, I would work on making th...
- Fri Oct 27, 2017 9:12 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2190
Re: Preliminary Critique
Both of these layouts look great! I like the color of the image in your first homepage, I think it would be more inviting than the image in the second homepage (although it looks super cool). Your use of old Reno images for navigation in the inner page layout is a nice idea, and I would love to see ...