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by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:42 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 FINAL
Replies: 12
Views: 1623

Re: Project 1 FINAL

selvster5000, This still seems like two different designs put side-by-side, although I do like the color choices, layout, and shapes. It has an excessive use of "links" and I think the ones on the left can be placed within the composition rather than floating objects to the left; perhaps w...
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:35 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Project 1
Replies: 16
Views: 2207

Re: Final Project 1

chaytothet,
Looks good. It's light and friendly. I think it's close to being done.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:33 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Final
Replies: 13
Views: 1701

Re: Project 1 - Final

erika.murray,
This is a strong design with good use of layout, composition, shapes, and color, but because everything is aligned so well I would justify the body copy. Aside from that, good work.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:30 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 15
Views: 1892

Re: Project One Final

Ltrueworthy,
I think this hame page is finished. I can't think of anything to say to make improvements on. Good job.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:28 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 14
Views: 1970

Re: Project 1 Final

CarnutianDragon,
I like this home page. The background image makes it peaceful and it has a good layout. the only thing ti improve on is your type alignments.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:25 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 7
Views: 963

Re: Project One Final

darian_p,
I like looking at this one, it's very light and easy to read; and there's nothing for me to say to improve on. good job.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:23 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 ~ Final
Replies: 13
Views: 1990

Re: Project 1 ~ Final

breezy, this one is cool and I like the shapes and color choices. The only adjustments you should consider making are: making the "project 2" and "project 3" different font styles and different color, perhaps white, because it takes away emphasis from your above headline and cont...
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:19 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Aries Project 1 Layout Final
Replies: 14
Views: 1635

Re: Aries Project 1 Layout Final

Aries,
I think it turned out good. colors are great, contrast with the body copy works. The only thing I would adjust is having the name above by the icon slightly darker to emphasize it more.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 8:24 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 13
Views: 1989

Re: Project One Final

susielang,
I think it's done. The only thing you need to take off would be the word "links" because you already have your links up above.


Jose Macias.
by Jose_M
Mon Oct 16, 2017 8:14 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: [Project 1] Final?
Replies: 15
Views: 1945

Re: [Project 1] Final?

SerenDark,
I like this one a lot. Everything is right where it needs to be and the colors are just right. I say it's finished.


Jose Macias.