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- Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:18 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Final
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2709
Re: Project 1 Final
Well I don't even have anything to say, really. Your website's layout and design are top-notch, and look so professional it still makes me wonder why you're taking this class, haha. The only suggestion that I have is just minor, and that the footer seems to have a lot of elements to it, and feels ju...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:15 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project one final
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3040
Re: Project one final
Paula- Great, clean layout! Simple and easy navigation, and cool use of imagery. My only suggestion would be to not use the italicized typeface for everything that you did- I probably would have kept it with your name and the links up above, but everything else (the title "Web Design and the cr...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:12 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Lingling's final critique for project1
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3023
Re: Lingling's final critique for project1
Lingling- Your layout is just great. Truly. It's easy to navigate, has a nice flow to it, and I see everything in order of importance just as it should be. Your choice of type in your head text is very nice and artsy, and I love your headshot, the mixed-media look is a nice touch. The only thing I w...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:08 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One - Final Output
- Replies: 18
- Views: 3113
Re: Project One - Final Output
I don't think deciding to completely change your layout was such a bad idea. This is just too cool! You really have a knack for design and what looks good, because this site, well, LOOKS GOOD! I like your sizing of elements, color choices, and layout. The only two little suggestions I have are compl...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:05 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Final
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2965
Re: Project 1 Final
Shalie! cool. Cool. COOL. That's what I thought when I first saw your design. It's a vast improvement from your first rough and definitely more unified. However, I have to nitpick at two things: first, the circular mandala graphic you've got front and center isn't, well, centered. I don't know if th...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:01 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project one online final
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3455
Re: Project one online final
Hi, Jason! The first thing I thought upon looking at your comp is that you were aiming to pay tribute to the CMYK palette. That's pretty cool and unique! I love your background image, I don't even know what it is but I like it! The main feedback I would like to voice is to get rid of that drop shado...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:58 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 - Final Design
- Replies: 19
- Views: 3187
Re: Project 1 - Final Design
Rosa- Great layout! There really is a nice dimensionality to it! I also love your background image- takes me to a place I've never been :) The only thing I would like to see is perhaps a different typeface to contrast that of the body copy. Right now it's all a sans-serif typeface, which makes it fo...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:56 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 - Final Critique
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2956
Re: Project 1 - Final Critique
Well, this is pretty awesome. I love the extensions behind your head text and main container, the dimensionality brought forth is insane! The only thing I noticed upon first glance is that the area with your headshot and the other sides of the main container is a tad dark. Not so much that it's supe...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:49 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Final Critique For Project One
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2734
Re: Final Critique For Project One
Hey, Georgia! This is a vast improvement from your first concept! Everything seems to be working better and your changing the colors and typeface of the body copy really served you well! I love the vividness of the imagery in your photographs, they leap off the page! Now the only gripe I can point o...
- Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:46 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: my final for Project one
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3929
Re: my final for Project one
Elizabeth- Holy crap I actually almost got blinded by how awesome this looks. Seriously. Your fabulosity (yes that's a word) shines through with this cooler-than-cool layout. Seriously. Look at you, all fly and stuff. Back to technicalities, I like how simple your layout is, I can see where everythi...