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by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 15
Views: 2709

Re: Project 1 Final

Well I don't even have anything to say, really. Your website's layout and design are top-notch, and look so professional it still makes me wonder why you're taking this class, haha. The only suggestion that I have is just minor, and that the footer seems to have a lot of elements to it, and feels ju...
by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:15 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one final
Replies: 17
Views: 3040

Re: Project one final

Paula- Great, clean layout! Simple and easy navigation, and cool use of imagery. My only suggestion would be to not use the italicized typeface for everything that you did- I probably would have kept it with your name and the links up above, but everything else (the title "Web Design and the cr...
by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Lingling's final critique for project1
Replies: 17
Views: 3023

Re: Lingling's final critique for project1

Lingling- Your layout is just great. Truly. It's easy to navigate, has a nice flow to it, and I see everything in order of importance just as it should be. Your choice of type in your head text is very nice and artsy, and I love your headshot, the mixed-media look is a nice touch. The only thing I w...
by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:08 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One - Final Output
Replies: 18
Views: 3113

Re: Project One - Final Output

I don't think deciding to completely change your layout was such a bad idea. This is just too cool! You really have a knack for design and what looks good, because this site, well, LOOKS GOOD! I like your sizing of elements, color choices, and layout. The only two little suggestions I have are compl...
by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:05 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 17
Views: 2965

Re: Project 1 Final

Shalie! cool. Cool. COOL. That's what I thought when I first saw your design. It's a vast improvement from your first rough and definitely more unified. However, I have to nitpick at two things: first, the circular mandala graphic you've got front and center isn't, well, centered. I don't know if th...
by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:01 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one online final
Replies: 20
Views: 3455

Re: Project one online final

Hi, Jason! The first thing I thought upon looking at your comp is that you were aiming to pay tribute to the CMYK palette. That's pretty cool and unique! I love your background image, I don't even know what it is but I like it! The main feedback I would like to voice is to get rid of that drop shado...
by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:58 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Final Design
Replies: 19
Views: 3187

Re: Project 1 - Final Design

Rosa- Great layout! There really is a nice dimensionality to it! I also love your background image- takes me to a place I've never been :) The only thing I would like to see is perhaps a different typeface to contrast that of the body copy. Right now it's all a sans-serif typeface, which makes it fo...
by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:56 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Final Critique
Replies: 17
Views: 2956

Re: Project 1 - Final Critique

Well, this is pretty awesome. I love the extensions behind your head text and main container, the dimensionality brought forth is insane! The only thing I noticed upon first glance is that the area with your headshot and the other sides of the main container is a tad dark. Not so much that it's supe...
by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:49 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Critique For Project One
Replies: 15
Views: 2734

Re: Final Critique For Project One

Hey, Georgia! This is a vast improvement from your first concept! Everything seems to be working better and your changing the colors and typeface of the body copy really served you well! I love the vividness of the imagery in your photographs, they leap off the page! Now the only gripe I can point o...
by justinepaigek
Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:46 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: my final for Project one
Replies: 23
Views: 3929

Re: my final for Project one

Elizabeth- Holy crap I actually almost got blinded by how awesome this looks. Seriously. Your fabulosity (yes that's a word) shines through with this cooler-than-cool layout. Seriously. Look at you, all fly and stuff. Back to technicalities, I like how simple your layout is, I can see where everythi...