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- Wed Nov 01, 2017 2:38 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 rough
- Replies: 9
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Project 2 rough
So the website I decided to redesign is burzum.org. This website is about promoting the band "BURZUM" and a certain belief/ideology, which is paganism. I went with a design that is simplistic and easy to navigate compared to the original website because it is crammed with information. Same...
- Wed Nov 01, 2017 2:28 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project two Layout Roughs
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2126
Re: Project two Layout Roughs
Ariesboxsye,
The first web-page works better. It is laid out well and the color scheme seems to work. The only thing to adjust/change/improve/include is the open space in the top, it's too distracting and can use some kind of filling.
Jose_Macias.
The first web-page works better. It is laid out well and the color scheme seems to work. The only thing to adjust/change/improve/include is the open space in the top, it's too distracting and can use some kind of filling.
Jose_Macias.
- Mon Oct 30, 2017 6:09 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project_2_roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2334
Re: project_2_roughs
Marco_Horta1,
The first design for the second concept (design_2) works better; it is laid out better and is Moore organized compared to the other three designs. The only thing to change (in the particular case) is the font style for the links, they shouldn't match the logo.
Jose Macias.
The first design for the second concept (design_2) works better; it is laid out better and is Moore organized compared to the other three designs. The only thing to change (in the particular case) is the font style for the links, they shouldn't match the logo.
Jose Macias.
- Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:51 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2197
Re: Project 2-Preliminary
Kyler_Rose,
I assume both are for video games. Either way you have to establish the subject matter. I'd have to go with the darker webpage because it has better images and a good start with the nav bar.
Jose Macias.
I assume both are for video games. Either way you have to establish the subject matter. I'd have to go with the darker webpage because it has better images and a good start with the nav bar.
Jose Macias.
- Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:46 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2177
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Peelio
Peelio,
I think these are both strong designs and there isn't anything for me to tell you to change or adjust. Everything is nice and crisp and easy to read and navigate. Two thumbs up.
Jose Macias.
I think these are both strong designs and there isn't anything for me to tell you to change or adjust. Everything is nice and crisp and easy to read and navigate. Two thumbs up.
Jose Macias.
- Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:42 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2243
Re: Lea_Project_2_preliminary_critique
Ltrueworthy, Well in terms of design I'd go with the first one. The trouble I find myself in with this one is, it is difficult to establish the subject matter. It is hard to figure out what this website is for and I have to view it in full detail just to get an idea of what I'm looking at. To help e...
- Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:34 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2589
Re: Project 2 - Preliminary Critique
erika.murray,
The overall design works well as a whole, the colors are fragrant and is easy to read and navigate. The main thing to adjust would be the navigation bar, it's too simple and easy to miss; perhaps using a bolder type style would help.
Jose Macias.
The overall design works well as a whole, the colors are fragrant and is easy to read and navigate. The main thing to adjust would be the navigation bar, it's too simple and easy to miss; perhaps using a bolder type style would help.
Jose Macias.
- Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:29 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 preliminary designs
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2555
Re: Project 2 preliminary designs
Cassiebowers, I like the second design better although I think the first one captures the subject matter a lot better along with the images and type style and layout. If you go with the first one, you should do some edits to the white fade above the cowboys, it makes it a little too obvious that it'...
- Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:19 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 15
- Views: 2191
Re: Preliminary Critique
ktwy, I like the subject matter of the website, I myself love to print. The greyscale images work very well with the white background and blue navigation bar. The logo is placed well and everything is easy to read. I know this is just a rough, but things to be included are "what kind of printin...
- Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:12 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2461
Re: Project 2
Pearl_Underwood, I like the headline/type style and navigation. As a whole, your design captures the subject matter of the website. The few things to change are the right two silhouettes: the leaping horse should switch places with the one beside it and facing the other direction so that there is sy...