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by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:51 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 preliminary designs
Replies: 13
Views: 2500

Re: Project 2 preliminary designs

I like the style and feel of both layouts. The old paper is cool. Reminds me of a Wanted poster. I think I am favoring the first layout with the cowboy image. That is really eye catching. The navigation is working well on that as well.
by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:49 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique #2
Replies: 15
Views: 2265

Re: Preliminary Critique #2

Blue layout is working pretty well. Really like the typeface. Organized very well. Layout is good and easy to read.
by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:48 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 2183

Re: Preliminary Critique

Both layouts are cool! I am leaning toward the first home page and service page. Like the colors and how you have the menu laid out. Great typeface choice. Adds visual interest with the images you chose.
by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:46 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: [Project 2] Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 2213

Re: [Project 2] Preliminary

Green layout has a nice color scheme and also a better feeling. Adding images may help. It does feel like the layout needs more. But I think it is going in the right direction.
by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:44 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2-Preliminary
Replies: 14
Views: 2194

Re: Project 2-Preliminary

Liking the black version more. Looks more reflective of the product. Also, I like the illustrations too.
by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:42 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: preliminary
Replies: 13
Views: 2435

Re: preliminary

Your first layouts really look "arty" and also capture the eye pretty well. Good colors. Maybe add in more design elements to make it come together more.
by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:40 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 13
Views: 2423

Re: Preliminary 2 Roughs, by Francisco

I like your 3rd and 4th designs. The natural look is good and the fourth one I like the layout. Think both designs have possibilities. Good colors and type.
by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:38 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 2263

Re: Project 2 Roughs

really like both layouts. Thinking I am going more for the pink than the black one. Really good layout. Think it is easy to understand what your site is about and good images.
by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:35 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 rough
Replies: 13
Views: 2528

Re: Project 2 rough

See good things in both layouts that could be combined. Try to unify your style more, you have that kid friendly feel. I like the illustration of the child- think it reflects well on your site but also the illustration of the tiger is pretty cute too. Good choice of typeface. Think that since this s...
by susielang
Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:32 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 2354

Re: Project 2 Preliminary

The type is way more organized in the second layout. But I really like the images in your first layout. So maybe combine those in the layout. Like the typeface you used. Reflects well on your subject. Dragons are cool.